The legend of the games.

[Hiroe]

The plot: Cicil has to find artifacts of great power from certain games. He also has to find allies so he can battle great forces of evil. (I'll explain the plot deeper later on). Also a warning this comic caontains blood and gore. Number 2 is here!

The comics:

 

[Flaming Quilava]

Weird start but ill see later on and then rate it....

 

[Fox♠]

It would be nice if you actually introduced us to the characters, not just some fight between the Halo guy and Kirby, by the way his name's Cecil, not Cicil. Your grammar and spelling isn't bad, I'll give you that, but the graphical side of it is horrible, your speech bubbles are awful, you've also J.PEG'd things.

 

[Hiroe]

Thank you Dragon master. Thanks for the tips Vaati. I need all the help I can get for my first sprite comic.