The lost art of alchemy

[Shadez]

this is an idea that i have in my head for a while
its based on the fullmetal alchemist series

Story:

you are an young boy/girl who is living in the normal modern world. One day you find a book lying around you take it with you and read it and find out its about some sort of magic called alchemy and you study it for a while. after a few weeks you try one of the things in your book and it works. now you study alchemy more and more find out even more things, but one day you meet someone who begins about alchemy and says he will kill you, but someone comes in his path and defends you now the man who said he will kill says he will kill after 30 days have passed, now the person who saved you makes you an offer he will learn you how to use alchemy if you can do some missions for him,so you begin your training

>the end<

okay that was the story

i also thought of some features they're not much but it's al i got:

original battle system
lot of cutscenes(i'm not sure of the name cutscenes but i thought it was called this)
...

and thats al i got

now tell you want you think of it

ps: if you can give me any tips for making things like the cutscenes for example can you give them

 

[Irtaza9993]

Nice, but is this supposed to be related to pokemon because it dosent look like it

 

[Fallen Angel_Messiah Of Black Roses]

Irta: Nothing in this forum HAS to be Pokemon.

Celebi: A little Skethy, you may want to elaborate more. I'm just saying, this is good for maybe a teaser... But not for a plot. Good luck though.

 

[Shadez]

yeah i know it is a little short but i am working on a longer version

EDIT: i made it a little longer but it's stil kinda short

maybe someone can help me with the story