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~The poison wasp ~ Beedrill The Killer

Let me say this, Its a good card, although it's a little weak for a 2nd stage pokemon. But since its a Poison type and a Beedrill, then 40 points of damage is ok. Beedrill is based always on poisoning or paralyzing, so you stick to the base, that's great. I'll give you an 9/10. Good job. Sugimori's art is very well used. I use it too on my cards.

ELGONZO!!!
 
I like the card disign but the text (well the moves) are alittle to close to each other.

:t094:~*!*~Queen Boo~*!*~
 
That's a good use of Ken Sugimori and Cascade's blanks.

I seem to have a problem with the second attack. If the defending Pokemon is already poisoned, so Beedrill will still Poison the defending Pokemon. There should be an effect text that will prevent Beedrill to use its effect on Poisoned Pokemon.

Stab should be Colorless. :D

And there's a cut off in the border near the illus.

Great Card. 8.9/10
 
Lets refer to the rulebook.
If a Pokemon is affected by a Special Condition (in this case Poison) and if it is affected by it again, then it doesn't count the second time, but keeps the previous poison.

So the attack effect would do nothing.

Oh, by the way, here's a new card:
[PokeCommunity.com] ~The poison wasp ~ Beedrill The Killer


Art by me =)
 
May I suggest you to change the first colorless of Fireworks into Fire? Just because of its effect. (Discarding a Fire energy)

There's another cut off near the "Basic".

8.9/10

I know about that rule, but there is no card that would say something like that in an effect so I put that in. :)
 
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