Umbreon/Espeon?

[.::t w i l i g h t::.]

I don't know if this is in the right place, but, I'm working on a fanfic and Umbreon and espeon are the stars. Should I change it?

PS: this is what one person said about my fic:

problems

-bragging always makes your reader biased, and biased as in disliking your fanfic before they even read your fanfic

-Umbreon = OU boring junkie 80% of the time

-plot can be as lame as possible, or as slow as possible, but a fanfic with such a plot can be just as good if your writing style can save yourself. Writing style can make the most unoriginal slow moving boring plot come to a new light.

 

[espeon and umbreon]

I don't think this is in the right place. This forum is where you post your fan -fic.

 

[oni flygon]

I'm going to move this in the Mixed Voting Polls...

 

[Mr Cat Dog]

This actually isn't for Pokemon Polls. It was also actually in OVP already XD Polls of this sort go in General XD That's why I thought it was a bit weird when Kairi moved it to FF :P