Ryu-Chan
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Umm...no title..yet!MUHAHAHA!*disapears*
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Simply put, don't ever post a thread like this again until you actually practice. Your spriting is ok, but your comics aren't.
Ryu-Chan
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Well can you leave me alone please?Can you let me post more than 3 first before you judge me?
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The problem is...your comics have no background. They're not read correctly, even if you use right-left. You've used space poorly. And some of the jokes fall flat.
That and there's absolutely nothing to grab the audience at the beginning.
That and there's absolutely nothing to grab the audience at the beginning.
Kurosaki Ichigo
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Sorry Lugia, but gonna have to agree with him there, hes really right.
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... Okay then... first of all,
I agree with Paul and Kakashi Hatake! >O
The Good Things: Sprites... that's pretty much it.
The Bad Things: Where to begin... first of all, to put it bluntly... you have no backgrounds. =0 Second, it's like... boring. In the first one, just a bunch of people singing and some Porygon/Dragonair/Dratini sprite thingy saying Idiot which is spelt wrong. In the second one, just a battle. BORING.[/blunt] Thirdly, spell check can be your friend. Along with proper grammar and punctuation.
Last but not least, you obviously can't handle someone pointing out the errors in your comic. Face it, not everyone is going to like your... so called "comic".
I agree with Paul and Kakashi Hatake! >O
The Good Things: Sprites... that's pretty much it.
The Bad Things: Where to begin... first of all, to put it bluntly... you have no backgrounds. =0 Second, it's like... boring. In the first one, just a bunch of people singing and some Porygon/Dragonair/Dratini sprite thingy saying Idiot which is spelt wrong. In the second one, just a battle. BORING.[/blunt] Thirdly, spell check can be your friend. Along with proper grammar and punctuation.
Last but not least, you obviously can't handle someone pointing out the errors in your comic. Face it, not everyone is going to like your... so called "comic".