what do u think of these

maaddogg

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    hi im kinda new to spriting so i just wanted to get ur opinion on my first two sprites ever
    so here it is

    FLACIOUS:
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    [PokeCommunity.com] what do u think of these


    HALEBIRD-EVOLVES FROM FLACIOUS:

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    [PokeCommunity.com] what do u think of these


    SHERGOUL:
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    [PokeCommunity.com] what do u think of these

    LOURRAN aka baby groudon:
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    [PokeCommunity.com] what do u think of these

    only the back sprite is made by me so credit to MASTER-SUICUNE for the front sprite


    ps:im not that good im just a noob so feel free 2 give me any opinions u have, it would really help alot!!!
    EDIT:this post will be updated at some point in time every week
     
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    I quite like those, and they are EXTREMELY good for a first time.
    The first one reminds me of a combination of the Sii-Ruuk from Star Wars and the Charmander line.
    I love the second one, I don't find it hard to make out at all, it's just a ghost wrapping himself in his cloak.
    I wish I could make sprites from scratch.........
     
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    These are pretty good except for two things. One is minor and not needed to be changed. I think the palette of the first is really bright. The more serious one is the shading. I don't see any. It's up to you but I think that adding shading will make them look better. It also adds depth and makes them look 3-D. But for a first time they're really good.
     
    You definitely need to work on your shading. As for the outlines, there's hardly any black, which makes it difficult to decipher when and where a line stops and ends. Speaking of lines, they seem choppy. They need to flow better. Be less pixely (which isn't a word. XP) and perhaps a bit thinner as well.

    I see great potential, keep up the good work. =]​
     
    hi im kinda new to spriting so i just wanted to get ur opinion on my first two sprites ever
    so here it is

    FLACIOUS:
    [PokeCommunity.com] what do u think of these
    [PokeCommunity.com] what do u think of these


    First, the basics. These two have a sort of weak outline. Make it a little bit more definite, as well as making the light source a little more consistent.

    Flacious's crest-flame is different in the two sprites. I suggest you pick the one on the back sprite, 'cause the regular sprite's just take away some of the coolness.

    Last thing on Flacious: the left hand on the front sprite looks sort of fat and Lugia-esque. Make it look more like Halebird's, and It'll look pretty sweet.

    HALEBIRD-EVOLVES FROM FLACIOUS:
    [PokeCommunity.com] what do u think of these
    [PokeCommunity.com] what do u think of these


    I really like this guy. Same deal about the outline and shading.
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    Very nice sprites you got here, keep working on them and keep spriting!
     
    You're customs aren't bad at all for a beginner. Actually, they're pretty good, despite lack of defined outlines. :3 but I think you may wanna cover the basics, first, so you have a good concept on basic techniques before going on too much further.
    But, of course, when I started, I sorta jumped to customs first, too... eventually I learned how to recolor.

    But that's just my recommendation.
     
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