ZyphUltimae
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If this was going to be a storyline for a fan game, which would be better and why?
Story1
The planet Yodu is in orbit and is going off course. After a few days it comes in path of planet Earth's sun causing total darkness. But, this is no ordinary blackout... It is Eclipse of Darkness! As the days grow darker and begin to fade, the pokemon wander what is going on, as well as humans.
Then... A mysterious gloomy shadow launches across the sky shooting from around the planet Yodur. Then the pokemon Yodura is detected as he calls out his message to the guardian of pokemon, Nitsua, whom lives deep within the earth's soul.
He speaks, "If you ever want to see light again... Give Back the Yoduro artifact and the eclipse will vanish and I'll let you keep your world."
?23 years ago your scientists began to create pokemon from energy sources...That source was my brother YODURO!" "Your people created 8 elemento gods from his corpse and seperated them to different regions of the world. Fire, Water, Electric, Grass, Psychic, Ground, Steel, and Dark gods were created using the 8 parts of my brother's body."
"Each part of his body still contains a peace of his soul. That means that there are 8 elemento spirits: Legs (Left and right), Arms (Left and right), Tail, Body Joints (Left and right), and the wings. The head was never found, it was said to be located on my planet in the Crater of Yodu."
"Yodu is trying to gain back its lost source Yoduro so that this planet can live once again. But the longer it stays away from that source, the more it takes away from yours. Eventually trees will die as days pass and all life will begin to fade. Water will evaporate, volcanoes will erupt, and earthquakes will occur."
Yodura then begins to fade due to weakness of not being in tact with Yoduro.
"Yodu will continue to do this until Yoduro is restored which cannot happen until all 8 elementos are fused together including Yoduro's head and Head spirit. Then he shall return to his homeland with me and all will be well, otherwise your planet and your so-call human race as well as the pokemon of your planet will peril."
"GO, Go now while there is still time. Collect the elementos, Find the head and its spirit, Restore my brother and all will be saved."
Yodura's body is vastly dissappearing as he says his last few words.
"It is up to you Nitsua, as guardian of all pokemon and human life of your planet, to save our worlds. Disguise yourself as an average human from your planet, befriend all the pokemon and the save the world with their help to unite and form the ultimate spirit....PLEASE HURRY!"
Yodura dissapears and Nitsua sends himself to the Nagao region where all 8 elemento spirits can be found.
(In this part i imagine the player being able to choose to be male or female and what age they want to be from 10-20_age will determin characters appearance)(Then they will choose a name or make their own name)
The player will then get to choose their homeland from 3 choices: Shiro City, Nokotown, or Kironosua Village. The family that they live with will believe that they have known the player all their life and think it?s their child when it is really Nitsua in disguise. The family may have brothers and sisters or none at all, but the can help during gameplay. Whatever you choose doesn't affect gameplay; you choose starter pokemon from parents as a birthday gift at the beginning of the game)
Professor bonsai will give you pokemon along the way to help you (He knows why you need to befriend every pokemon). He will give you devices with up to date technology to use as well, like an instant messenger device that let you know when new pokemon are available.
Objectives of game (will be more detailed if production of game occurs):
After receiving starter pokemon, travel to each location of Nagao
Defeat gym leaders who hold the information to where the elemento spirits are being located
Defeat and capture the elementos in the elemento chamber on Bonsai Island, they will be used to revive Yoduro
After reviving Yoduro and all is starting to go well, he gets captured by an evil team that escapes to the home planet Yodu and try to harness his power to take over the universe
Now you and your pokemon friends will have to defeat Yoduro and restore the world by using the ultimate unified life force to take down this evil before it?s too late!
Story 2
100 new Pok?mon
? New Pok?mon type: Light!
? Choose 1 of three characters.
? Red Character (Gary?): Champion of Kanto, has six Level 100 Kanto Pok?mon.
? Blue Character (Lance?): Champion of Jhoto, has six Level 100 Jhoto Pok?mon.
? Green Character (Steven?): Champion of Hoen, has six Level 100 Hoen Pok?mon.
? All characters receive a message from a strange man, summoning them to his palace in the Leako (lee-A-ko) region.
? The mysterious person has a new Pok?mon of the dark type, Necralis.
? The man places a bet with the three trainers. If they can beat his Pok?mon, they receive a new type of powerful Light type Pok?mon. If they lose, he gets to keep theirs.
? Necralis owns all of the trainers Pok?mon.
? The man takes their Pok?mon and kicks the trainers out (kindly.)
? As they leave, they notice a pendant on the man?s jacket. It says T.D.
? With no Pok?mon, the trainers cannot get back to their regions.
? The eventually wander into Barksburough Town.
? There they meet Professor Spruce, and she invites them to stay in her Lab/House.
? She learns who they are and what happened earlier, then gives them each a Pok?mon.
? Gary gets a fire type.
? Lance gets a water type.
? Steven gets a grass type.
? Split with your fellow champions and go out on your own adventure.
? There are now 18 gyms, 1 for each type.
? Half way through the gyms, you meet up with your fellow champion that has the starter that you?re strong against. You should own him.
? Gym list as follows:
? Normal
? Bug
? Rock
? Poison
? Electric
? Ground
? Flying
? Water
? Grass
? Fire
? Steel
? Fighting
? Ghost
? Psychic
? Ice
? Dragon
? Light
? Dark
Plot unfolds as you lean about the organization called Total Darkness.
Learn that there is a giant meteor that causes an eclipse every thousand years.
Learn that is where Necralis came from and there is also another light Pok?mon called Larichon, who still slumbers there.
Total Darkness is supposed to keep the meteor in front of the sun, making it eternally dark.
Only Necralis can hold the meteor, and only Larichon can defeat Necralis.
Total Darkness is comprised of the leader and three other Administrators.
T.D. Administrators:
Giovanni
Maxie
Archie
Evice
The End?
So post which on is better and why.
---ABSOL FOREVER!---
-Zyph
Story1
The planet Yodu is in orbit and is going off course. After a few days it comes in path of planet Earth's sun causing total darkness. But, this is no ordinary blackout... It is Eclipse of Darkness! As the days grow darker and begin to fade, the pokemon wander what is going on, as well as humans.
Then... A mysterious gloomy shadow launches across the sky shooting from around the planet Yodur. Then the pokemon Yodura is detected as he calls out his message to the guardian of pokemon, Nitsua, whom lives deep within the earth's soul.
He speaks, "If you ever want to see light again... Give Back the Yoduro artifact and the eclipse will vanish and I'll let you keep your world."
?23 years ago your scientists began to create pokemon from energy sources...That source was my brother YODURO!" "Your people created 8 elemento gods from his corpse and seperated them to different regions of the world. Fire, Water, Electric, Grass, Psychic, Ground, Steel, and Dark gods were created using the 8 parts of my brother's body."
"Each part of his body still contains a peace of his soul. That means that there are 8 elemento spirits: Legs (Left and right), Arms (Left and right), Tail, Body Joints (Left and right), and the wings. The head was never found, it was said to be located on my planet in the Crater of Yodu."
"Yodu is trying to gain back its lost source Yoduro so that this planet can live once again. But the longer it stays away from that source, the more it takes away from yours. Eventually trees will die as days pass and all life will begin to fade. Water will evaporate, volcanoes will erupt, and earthquakes will occur."
Yodura then begins to fade due to weakness of not being in tact with Yoduro.
"Yodu will continue to do this until Yoduro is restored which cannot happen until all 8 elementos are fused together including Yoduro's head and Head spirit. Then he shall return to his homeland with me and all will be well, otherwise your planet and your so-call human race as well as the pokemon of your planet will peril."
"GO, Go now while there is still time. Collect the elementos, Find the head and its spirit, Restore my brother and all will be saved."
Yodura's body is vastly dissappearing as he says his last few words.
"It is up to you Nitsua, as guardian of all pokemon and human life of your planet, to save our worlds. Disguise yourself as an average human from your planet, befriend all the pokemon and the save the world with their help to unite and form the ultimate spirit....PLEASE HURRY!"
Yodura dissapears and Nitsua sends himself to the Nagao region where all 8 elemento spirits can be found.
(In this part i imagine the player being able to choose to be male or female and what age they want to be from 10-20_age will determin characters appearance)(Then they will choose a name or make their own name)
The player will then get to choose their homeland from 3 choices: Shiro City, Nokotown, or Kironosua Village. The family that they live with will believe that they have known the player all their life and think it?s their child when it is really Nitsua in disguise. The family may have brothers and sisters or none at all, but the can help during gameplay. Whatever you choose doesn't affect gameplay; you choose starter pokemon from parents as a birthday gift at the beginning of the game)
Professor bonsai will give you pokemon along the way to help you (He knows why you need to befriend every pokemon). He will give you devices with up to date technology to use as well, like an instant messenger device that let you know when new pokemon are available.
Objectives of game (will be more detailed if production of game occurs):
After receiving starter pokemon, travel to each location of Nagao
Defeat gym leaders who hold the information to where the elemento spirits are being located
Defeat and capture the elementos in the elemento chamber on Bonsai Island, they will be used to revive Yoduro
After reviving Yoduro and all is starting to go well, he gets captured by an evil team that escapes to the home planet Yodu and try to harness his power to take over the universe
Now you and your pokemon friends will have to defeat Yoduro and restore the world by using the ultimate unified life force to take down this evil before it?s too late!
Story 2
100 new Pok?mon
? New Pok?mon type: Light!
? Choose 1 of three characters.
? Red Character (Gary?): Champion of Kanto, has six Level 100 Kanto Pok?mon.
? Blue Character (Lance?): Champion of Jhoto, has six Level 100 Jhoto Pok?mon.
? Green Character (Steven?): Champion of Hoen, has six Level 100 Hoen Pok?mon.
? All characters receive a message from a strange man, summoning them to his palace in the Leako (lee-A-ko) region.
? The mysterious person has a new Pok?mon of the dark type, Necralis.
? The man places a bet with the three trainers. If they can beat his Pok?mon, they receive a new type of powerful Light type Pok?mon. If they lose, he gets to keep theirs.
? Necralis owns all of the trainers Pok?mon.
? The man takes their Pok?mon and kicks the trainers out (kindly.)
? As they leave, they notice a pendant on the man?s jacket. It says T.D.
? With no Pok?mon, the trainers cannot get back to their regions.
? The eventually wander into Barksburough Town.
? There they meet Professor Spruce, and she invites them to stay in her Lab/House.
? She learns who they are and what happened earlier, then gives them each a Pok?mon.
? Gary gets a fire type.
? Lance gets a water type.
? Steven gets a grass type.
? Split with your fellow champions and go out on your own adventure.
? There are now 18 gyms, 1 for each type.
? Half way through the gyms, you meet up with your fellow champion that has the starter that you?re strong against. You should own him.
? Gym list as follows:
? Normal
? Bug
? Rock
? Poison
? Electric
? Ground
? Flying
? Water
? Grass
? Fire
? Steel
? Fighting
? Ghost
? Psychic
? Ice
? Dragon
? Light
? Dark
Plot unfolds as you lean about the organization called Total Darkness.
Learn that there is a giant meteor that causes an eclipse every thousand years.
Learn that is where Necralis came from and there is also another light Pok?mon called Larichon, who still slumbers there.
Total Darkness is supposed to keep the meteor in front of the sun, making it eternally dark.
Only Necralis can hold the meteor, and only Larichon can defeat Necralis.
Total Darkness is comprised of the leader and three other Administrators.
T.D. Administrators:
Giovanni
Maxie
Archie
Evice
The End?
So post which on is better and why.
---ABSOL FOREVER!---
-Zyph