Q Man
Erm...
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- Years
- Age 38
- Cerulean City
- Seen Apr 4, 2009
Okay, first off, I'd like to say that I've had this fic written for quite some time, and had it posted up on Fanfiction.net, but it only got 3 reviews in the entire time it was there... meh... BTW, this is the first story I actually released online. Also, I wrote it to the tune of how I was feeling at the time, so the story itself is relatively fluffy... Also, don't try to place any modern-day assumptions on the story (such as the fact that Togepi evolved and left, yahtta yahtta...) Also, if you haven't noticed already... its a big one-shot :p
anyway, enough with the blabbing, onto the story. :D
-----"Why Couldn't You Have Said It Sooner?" By Q Man-----
It was a secluded area of the forest, guarded all around by trees with a beautiful
stretch of river flowing through it. It had a little clearing up against some rocks, a perfect
place to stop and fish. It was some distance away from Viridian City, but it was only an
hour's or so bike ride away if you took a straight route through a field at the edge of the
forest, but that was another matter. But, at that little spot of land next to the river, a young
woman of about 16 sat, fishing pole in hand. She was thin, and had very noticeable
orange hair and blue green eyes. Her name was Misty, and she was fishing, but she had
been sitting there for hours, not even caring if she got a bite or not. Five years ago, it
would've been different. She was trying her hardest to catch some fish, but, on that day,
all she managed to catch was the rest of her life, little did she know it. It came in the form
of a boy and his Pikachu. They boy's name was Ash, Ash Ketchum. He needed to get his
Pikachu to the Viridian City Pok?mon Center, and in his need for speedy travel, took
Misty's bike, promising to return it someday. That day was the start of the rest of her life,
for she found her bike in ruins, and eventually managed to make it to Viridian to meet the
boy yet again. It was that day when she started her adventure, since she swore that she'd
follow him anywhere he went until he paid her back for the bike. At first, it was just
about the bike, but soon after, in her travels she quickly forgot about her bike, and her
perceptions about Ash started to change. Soon, she found herself questioning how she felt
about Ash, and eventually regretted the decision that she made on that day so long ago,
when he surprised her one morning with, what else, a brand new bike. She had
completely forgotten all about it, and was quite cross about the incident indeed. Was she
to tell him that she had completely forgotten about the bike? Was she to tell him that she
had actually felt so strongly about Ash that she never wanted to leave him? Was she to
tell him the truth - that she had grown, to love him? No, she thought. "He doesn't love
me, he couldn't!" she continually said to herself, "He only thought I was following him
because of this stupid bike". It was on that day when they parted ways, Misty speeding
off on her new bike, not wanting Ash to see the tears in her eyes and the sorrow on her
face. Little did she know that Ash regretted the decision as much as she did.
For Ash, it was something as simple as being saved from the river by a girl he
didn't know, and at first, didn't want to associate with at all. He merely needed a quick
way to get to Viridian to help his injured Pikachu. But after totally destroying her bike, he
had to run the rest of the distance to Viridian. Little had he known it at the time, the
destroyed bike became a major complication in his whole career as a Pok?mon Trainer.
For when the possessor of the bike, Misty, found him at the Pok?mon Center in Viridian
City, she had vowed to him that she wouldn't stop following him until he paid her back
for the bike. So he set off, Misty always tagging along behind him. Through the bad
times and the good, they were always together. They weren't always alone, for they soon
after gained a new partner, Brock, in their travels. Ash, through the entirety of his journey
alongside Misty, thought that she was only following him because of the bike. But, he
soon grew to respect her, and after that, eventually he grew to love her, but he dared not
tell a soul. "She doesn't love me, all she wants is another bike," he thought to himself.
Eventually though, he came to a decision that he knew he had to make, as much as he
didn't want to. He decided to get her a new bike. He knew that once he gave her the bike,
she would leave him, for what may have been forever. The day came. He had purchased
the bike, and it was time to give it to her. When she accepted the bike, he quickly turned
his back to her, and said glumly, "There, you've got your new bike, you can go now". As
he said this, he grew more and more saddened, and eventually started to cry. He didn't
want Misty to see this, for he didn't want her to know how he felt about her. He didn't
want Brock to know either, and as such, he made sure that Brock wasn't around when he
gave Misty the bike and cried afterward. When he did meet up with Brock later that day,
he told him that he had given Misty her bike back, and that she was now gone. He did his
best to hold back his emotions, for they were quite strong. It was a decision that led him
to be so depressed that he came dangerously close to giving up on his Pok?mon journey.
That was almost three and a half years ago.
Now, Ash was world famous, he had beaten the Pok?mon League, and the Elite
Four. His face was plastered across newspapers, magazines, and televisions everywhere.
But his victory hadn't made him nearly as happy as he had hoped it would. Something
was missing. It seemed as though for three and a half years, a part of him had been
missing, and it left along with the only one he truly loved, Misty.
It was only days before had Misty gone to the spot where she first met him, and
tried to do some fishing, but her only result was sitting there for hours thinking about Ash
and the times they shared together.
Little did she know how much things were going to change for her yet again. She
woke up some mornings later, to discover Ash's picture across the front page of the
newspaper. Her sisters had told her that Ash had won the Pok?mon League as they
handed her the newspaper, and she quickly and eagerly read the article. She returned to
her room with the newspaper, and clipped the article and photo, and pasted them into her
diary, almost all the pages of which were filled with her feelings for Ash that she felt day
by day. She quickly wrote a whole page diary entry of the things she felt just from
reading the small article about Ash's victory. One thing in the article, though, particularly
interested her, and was enough for her to fill yet another page of her diary. The segment
was part of the interview with him just after he had won.
that he still remembers her. She was also surprised to know just how much her leaving
had affected him. She finished writing in her diary, and laid down on her bed, staring at
the ceiling, and thinking of Ash. Ash, on the other hand, was on the move. He had taken a
train that left from the Indigo Plateau to Viridian City. From there, he boarded another
train, headed for Cerulean City. He sat back in his seat, with one of his best friends, his
ever-trusty Pikachu, in the seat next to him. He looked out the window at the familiar
scenery as it zipped by. His train of thought was disturbed, however, by the conductor's
voice over the train's announcement system. "We will be arriving in Cerulean City in
approximately five minutes, please check your local area for any personal belongings and
prepare to exit the train when we arrive." Ash looked down at Pikachu. "You hear that,
buddy? We'll be in Cerulean in five minutes! I can't wait to see Misty again, it's been so
long!" "Pi-Pikachu!" was Pikachu's only reply. Ash gave Pikachu a little scratch behind
the ears - Pikachu liked that.
Misty eventually got out of bed, and headed down to the Cerulean Gym. Daisy
was there to greet her. "Like, Misty, we're not going to have the gym open for any
battling today." She said. "Oh, well, okay then." Misty replied. She slowly walked over
near the poolside edge, and sat down next to it. She leaned her face down, and rested it on
her knees, while she had her arms wrapped around her legs to prop them up. She gave out
a long sigh to herself. Daisy and Lily were in the entrance lobby, looking into the main
gym area at their depressed sister through the main red double doors that connected the
two rooms.
"Like, Misty's acting really depressed today, I wonder why" Lily asked.
"You know, it's because she's heard about Ash again, from the newspaper this
morning." Daisy responded.
"Well, you'd think that she'd be happy for him that he won the League, right?" Lily
asked again.
"Yeah, I would think that she would be happy for him. She must just be wishing he were
here again." Daisy finished, as she closed the large double doors.
As soon as the train came to a stop at the station, Ash and Pikachu were the first
to get off, and their first destination - the Cerulean Gym. "It can't be much farther, now,
Pikachu!" Ash said, running at full speed toward the Gym. Soon after, he arrived. It was
exactly how he had entered it the first time, so long ago. He slowly walked up to the
double glass doors that led inside, and said "Well, Pikachu, this is it. I just hope that
Misty remembers me."
He walked in. Daisy and Lily heard the doors opening, and turned around to see
who it was. They were left speechless when they recognized him, their eyes bulging
slightly, and their faces, ever so slightly paled. "Ash, is that you?" Lily asked when she
regained her composure.
Ash wasn't in the mood for small talk, and said, "Yeah, it's me. But that's not
important right now, where's Misty? I want - no, need to talk to her." He was very eager
to see Misty again, and the sooner he could do so, the better.
"Like, she's in the pool area" Daisy said as she pointed toward the closed red
double doors that led to the main gym area.
"All right, thanks." Ash said quickly.
Instead of going through the main doors, he took off down one of the side
hallways that led up to the stands. There was another pair of big red doors at the top of
the staircase that led to the seats in the main Gym. He took a deep breath, and slowly
pushed the doors open. He stood behind the top of seats, looking around at the gym he
had not been to for almost five years. That didn't matter to him though, since all he really
wanted to see was the young girl that he hadn't seen for what seemed like so much
longer. He didn't even notice that she was sitting right next to the pool, but she was
hidden due to the fact that the bottommost rows of seats were fairly elevated from the
pool level, since there was a hallway that passed beneath the rows of seats, that led down
to the viewing area under the surface of the pool.
Misty heard the doors open behind her, and lifted her head ever so slightly. She
was going to turn around and look to see who it was, but she figured not to, because it
must've only been one of her sisters, she figured. She rested her forehead back down on
her knees, and went back to moping, but when she heard a male voice call out "Misty, are
you in here?" she quickly lifted her head and looked around her. She couldn't see Ash at
the top of the stairs, so she thought that it was just a figment of her imagination, that she
was just hearing things. But then she heard footsteps, which belonged to Ash as he
walked down the side aisle that ran down the entire length of the rows of seats. Misty
stood up, and again looked around, to see a figure walking down one of the aisles,
covered in a shadow that was notorious for mysteriously plaguing that particular aisle.
Ash noticed Misty's orange hair when she stood up, though it was all he could see, it was
enough. Once again, he called out "Misty? Is that you?" as he quickened his pace down
the aisle. Misty kept looking at the figure walking down the aisle, and she thought it had
two heads, but when the person walked out of the mysterious shadow, all was revealed.
This person didn't have two heads; it was a man with a Pikachu on his shoulder. But what
she noticed after that she didn't believe. When she looked into the face of the person, she
recognized it as the same one she had seen on the front page of the newspaper just that
morning. It was Ash, and he was here, at the Cerulean Gym, looking for Misty.
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anyway, enough with the blabbing, onto the story. :D
-----"Why Couldn't You Have Said It Sooner?" By Q Man-----
It was a secluded area of the forest, guarded all around by trees with a beautiful
stretch of river flowing through it. It had a little clearing up against some rocks, a perfect
place to stop and fish. It was some distance away from Viridian City, but it was only an
hour's or so bike ride away if you took a straight route through a field at the edge of the
forest, but that was another matter. But, at that little spot of land next to the river, a young
woman of about 16 sat, fishing pole in hand. She was thin, and had very noticeable
orange hair and blue green eyes. Her name was Misty, and she was fishing, but she had
been sitting there for hours, not even caring if she got a bite or not. Five years ago, it
would've been different. She was trying her hardest to catch some fish, but, on that day,
all she managed to catch was the rest of her life, little did she know it. It came in the form
of a boy and his Pikachu. They boy's name was Ash, Ash Ketchum. He needed to get his
Pikachu to the Viridian City Pok?mon Center, and in his need for speedy travel, took
Misty's bike, promising to return it someday. That day was the start of the rest of her life,
for she found her bike in ruins, and eventually managed to make it to Viridian to meet the
boy yet again. It was that day when she started her adventure, since she swore that she'd
follow him anywhere he went until he paid her back for the bike. At first, it was just
about the bike, but soon after, in her travels she quickly forgot about her bike, and her
perceptions about Ash started to change. Soon, she found herself questioning how she felt
about Ash, and eventually regretted the decision that she made on that day so long ago,
when he surprised her one morning with, what else, a brand new bike. She had
completely forgotten all about it, and was quite cross about the incident indeed. Was she
to tell him that she had completely forgotten about the bike? Was she to tell him that she
had actually felt so strongly about Ash that she never wanted to leave him? Was she to
tell him the truth - that she had grown, to love him? No, she thought. "He doesn't love
me, he couldn't!" she continually said to herself, "He only thought I was following him
because of this stupid bike". It was on that day when they parted ways, Misty speeding
off on her new bike, not wanting Ash to see the tears in her eyes and the sorrow on her
face. Little did she know that Ash regretted the decision as much as she did.
For Ash, it was something as simple as being saved from the river by a girl he
didn't know, and at first, didn't want to associate with at all. He merely needed a quick
way to get to Viridian to help his injured Pikachu. But after totally destroying her bike, he
had to run the rest of the distance to Viridian. Little had he known it at the time, the
destroyed bike became a major complication in his whole career as a Pok?mon Trainer.
For when the possessor of the bike, Misty, found him at the Pok?mon Center in Viridian
City, she had vowed to him that she wouldn't stop following him until he paid her back
for the bike. So he set off, Misty always tagging along behind him. Through the bad
times and the good, they were always together. They weren't always alone, for they soon
after gained a new partner, Brock, in their travels. Ash, through the entirety of his journey
alongside Misty, thought that she was only following him because of the bike. But, he
soon grew to respect her, and after that, eventually he grew to love her, but he dared not
tell a soul. "She doesn't love me, all she wants is another bike," he thought to himself.
Eventually though, he came to a decision that he knew he had to make, as much as he
didn't want to. He decided to get her a new bike. He knew that once he gave her the bike,
she would leave him, for what may have been forever. The day came. He had purchased
the bike, and it was time to give it to her. When she accepted the bike, he quickly turned
his back to her, and said glumly, "There, you've got your new bike, you can go now". As
he said this, he grew more and more saddened, and eventually started to cry. He didn't
want Misty to see this, for he didn't want her to know how he felt about her. He didn't
want Brock to know either, and as such, he made sure that Brock wasn't around when he
gave Misty the bike and cried afterward. When he did meet up with Brock later that day,
he told him that he had given Misty her bike back, and that she was now gone. He did his
best to hold back his emotions, for they were quite strong. It was a decision that led him
to be so depressed that he came dangerously close to giving up on his Pok?mon journey.
That was almost three and a half years ago.
Now, Ash was world famous, he had beaten the Pok?mon League, and the Elite
Four. His face was plastered across newspapers, magazines, and televisions everywhere.
But his victory hadn't made him nearly as happy as he had hoped it would. Something
was missing. It seemed as though for three and a half years, a part of him had been
missing, and it left along with the only one he truly loved, Misty.
It was only days before had Misty gone to the spot where she first met him, and
tried to do some fishing, but her only result was sitting there for hours thinking about Ash
and the times they shared together.
Little did she know how much things were going to change for her yet again. She
woke up some mornings later, to discover Ash's picture across the front page of the
newspaper. Her sisters had told her that Ash had won the Pok?mon League as they
handed her the newspaper, and she quickly and eagerly read the article. She returned to
her room with the newspaper, and clipped the article and photo, and pasted them into her
diary, almost all the pages of which were filled with her feelings for Ash that she felt day
by day. She quickly wrote a whole page diary entry of the things she felt just from
reading the small article about Ash's victory. One thing in the article, though, particularly
interested her, and was enough for her to fill yet another page of her diary. The segment
was part of the interview with him just after he had won.
"When Champion Ash Ketchum was asked about what he went through to get to where he is today, he said that at first, it was tough, but he had his friends beside him almost the whole way. However, three and a half years ago, he almost gave up training when he parted ways with the best of his friends. Here's what he had to say. "It was really painful. She was my best friend, I thought I would never have to say goodbye to her. When she left, I was so depressed, I couldn't train, I couldn't sleep, and I couldn't concentrate on anything. I felt so alone, even though I still did have another friend by my side through it all. Eventually, I came to grips with the situation, and started training again. But I felt different. I didn't feel as I used to; I was still very depressed." Ketchum was also asked what he intends to do now that he is champion. "Personally, I'm going to take a long break from training. There are some things I need to fix in my life, and I'm not going to wait any longer." When asked where his intended destination was, he gave no comment, and noted that he merely wished to not be disturbed. Ketchum assures us though, that he will be back to training Pok?mon someday in the future."
Misty read over the segment time and again, completely shocked about the fact
that he still remembers her. She was also surprised to know just how much her leaving
had affected him. She finished writing in her diary, and laid down on her bed, staring at
the ceiling, and thinking of Ash. Ash, on the other hand, was on the move. He had taken a
train that left from the Indigo Plateau to Viridian City. From there, he boarded another
train, headed for Cerulean City. He sat back in his seat, with one of his best friends, his
ever-trusty Pikachu, in the seat next to him. He looked out the window at the familiar
scenery as it zipped by. His train of thought was disturbed, however, by the conductor's
voice over the train's announcement system. "We will be arriving in Cerulean City in
approximately five minutes, please check your local area for any personal belongings and
prepare to exit the train when we arrive." Ash looked down at Pikachu. "You hear that,
buddy? We'll be in Cerulean in five minutes! I can't wait to see Misty again, it's been so
long!" "Pi-Pikachu!" was Pikachu's only reply. Ash gave Pikachu a little scratch behind
the ears - Pikachu liked that.
Misty eventually got out of bed, and headed down to the Cerulean Gym. Daisy
was there to greet her. "Like, Misty, we're not going to have the gym open for any
battling today." She said. "Oh, well, okay then." Misty replied. She slowly walked over
near the poolside edge, and sat down next to it. She leaned her face down, and rested it on
her knees, while she had her arms wrapped around her legs to prop them up. She gave out
a long sigh to herself. Daisy and Lily were in the entrance lobby, looking into the main
gym area at their depressed sister through the main red double doors that connected the
two rooms.
"Like, Misty's acting really depressed today, I wonder why" Lily asked.
"You know, it's because she's heard about Ash again, from the newspaper this
morning." Daisy responded.
"Well, you'd think that she'd be happy for him that he won the League, right?" Lily
asked again.
"Yeah, I would think that she would be happy for him. She must just be wishing he were
here again." Daisy finished, as she closed the large double doors.
As soon as the train came to a stop at the station, Ash and Pikachu were the first
to get off, and their first destination - the Cerulean Gym. "It can't be much farther, now,
Pikachu!" Ash said, running at full speed toward the Gym. Soon after, he arrived. It was
exactly how he had entered it the first time, so long ago. He slowly walked up to the
double glass doors that led inside, and said "Well, Pikachu, this is it. I just hope that
Misty remembers me."
He walked in. Daisy and Lily heard the doors opening, and turned around to see
who it was. They were left speechless when they recognized him, their eyes bulging
slightly, and their faces, ever so slightly paled. "Ash, is that you?" Lily asked when she
regained her composure.
Ash wasn't in the mood for small talk, and said, "Yeah, it's me. But that's not
important right now, where's Misty? I want - no, need to talk to her." He was very eager
to see Misty again, and the sooner he could do so, the better.
"Like, she's in the pool area" Daisy said as she pointed toward the closed red
double doors that led to the main gym area.
"All right, thanks." Ash said quickly.
Instead of going through the main doors, he took off down one of the side
hallways that led up to the stands. There was another pair of big red doors at the top of
the staircase that led to the seats in the main Gym. He took a deep breath, and slowly
pushed the doors open. He stood behind the top of seats, looking around at the gym he
had not been to for almost five years. That didn't matter to him though, since all he really
wanted to see was the young girl that he hadn't seen for what seemed like so much
longer. He didn't even notice that she was sitting right next to the pool, but she was
hidden due to the fact that the bottommost rows of seats were fairly elevated from the
pool level, since there was a hallway that passed beneath the rows of seats, that led down
to the viewing area under the surface of the pool.
Misty heard the doors open behind her, and lifted her head ever so slightly. She
was going to turn around and look to see who it was, but she figured not to, because it
must've only been one of her sisters, she figured. She rested her forehead back down on
her knees, and went back to moping, but when she heard a male voice call out "Misty, are
you in here?" she quickly lifted her head and looked around her. She couldn't see Ash at
the top of the stairs, so she thought that it was just a figment of her imagination, that she
was just hearing things. But then she heard footsteps, which belonged to Ash as he
walked down the side aisle that ran down the entire length of the rows of seats. Misty
stood up, and again looked around, to see a figure walking down one of the aisles,
covered in a shadow that was notorious for mysteriously plaguing that particular aisle.
Ash noticed Misty's orange hair when she stood up, though it was all he could see, it was
enough. Once again, he called out "Misty? Is that you?" as he quickened his pace down
the aisle. Misty kept looking at the figure walking down the aisle, and she thought it had
two heads, but when the person walked out of the mysterious shadow, all was revealed.
This person didn't have two heads; it was a man with a Pikachu on his shoulder. But what
she noticed after that she didn't believe. When she looked into the face of the person, she
recognized it as the same one she had seen on the front page of the newspaper just that
morning. It was Ash, and he was here, at the Cerulean Gym, looking for Misty.
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