WILLBILL2's Revamps and devamps

[kevcrash]

Hi!

Here are some Revamps:

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And some Devamps:

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Thanks for coming!!

Beginner Critique would be awesome!

 

[Kaylee Krysteenah Fynch]

The revamps seem well done... to me at least, without trying to nitpick (that is to say, somebody may come along and find some flaw, but they seem okay to me... >.<).

Dunno about the devamps. Totodile looks pretty good, but I don't know if there are too many colors in rattata, because it seems to have shading on it's mouth. I'd have to actually count colors, which I don't feel like doing. Besides, I don't do devamps or other old-version sprites, since I adore graphics and colors. So maybe I'm not the best one to ask about devamps.

 

[Camyre]

Every one of these was saved as a JPEG. Never do that. Save as PNG from now on.

There's a black splotch on the left side of Aipom's head. I'm not even sure if there should be black outlining there, so you'll want to fix that. Also, you could use more black outlines on the right ear.

There aren't too many problems with Caterpie, but there's a clump of dark green outline pixels under its head. That was from the old sprite, but you need to fix it. It has the same problem near its left eye.

Mew looks okay, but you used too much black on the tail, arms, and right foot.

The Totodile looks okay, but the Rattata was just recolored and deshaded. Just because there's no shading doesn't make it a devamp; there's even shadows on the original Yellow sprite.

 

[kevcrash]

Every one of these was saved as a JPEG. Never do that. Save as PNG from now on.

There's a black splotch on the left side of Aipom's head. I'm not even sure if there should be black outlining there, so you'll want to fix that. Also, you could use more black outlines on the right ear.

There aren't too many problems with Caterpie, but there's a clump of dark green outline pixels under its head. That was from the old sprite, but you need to fix it. It has the same problem near its left eye.

Mew looks okay, but you used too much black on the tail, arms, and right foot.

The Totodile looks okay, but the Rattata was just recolored and deshaded. Just because there's no shading doesn't make it a devamp; there's even shadows on the original Yellow sprite.

Okay thank you! The only thing I can say is that the original Rattata had NO shading on it even zoomed in to large size...