Wishes, are they real?

[Zeffy]

Wishes, are they real?

I wished one night,
Upon a star so bright.
I thought it would come true,
And so I waited in your woo.

Wishes, are they real?
They don't seem much of a big deal.
And so I end this poem,
with a wish upon another star.
Just to figure things out,
I wish I could fall in love.

Meh, I made it on the spot (not right now) to practice for my poetry exam in English this coming Saturday.

Thoughts? Criticisms? Violent reactions?

 

[TJgamer]

Pretty good!
It reminds me of the "When You Wish Upon a Star" song from Disney's Pinocchio.
Don't you think so?

 

[Midnight Moon~]

*has a violent reaction* x3 Just kidding. I love it, it has this really simple, catchy flow to it, much like (as the previous poster said) a disney song. I was kind of thrown with the "woo" part, expecting more of a "waiting on you" thing, but after re-reading it, I understood what you meant(:

 

[Zeffy]

Thanks.
I think I've heard that song before, but its not what I use to reference this poem...just the subject: "Real". xP