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yet another series of PC comics

OH and you can join to this comic if you want only post your sprite(i sayed this because nobody has join)
 
Nice comic.

I enjoyed your comic.But I will not rate it.It still needs to be finished correct?
 
lol oh yes, i'll join sorry! I always represent Kirby in comics so...Click here just give credit to the original owner because they aint mine XD
 
Lizzie said:
lol oh yes, i'll join sorry! I always represent Kirby in comics so...Click here just give credit to the original owner because they aint mine XD
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OK Lizzie you are in next comic and heres the new comic part
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I think they are almost as tdt's (that's his name right?) comics, I wouldn't spend to much time here, they're just an replica (well almost) that's only my point of view!
 
I wouldn't spend to much time here, they're just an replica (well almost) that's only my point of view!
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C.O.H. I know you were only giving an opinion, but it's mean to just say "don't spend your time here" just try not to criticize too harshly : / he's doing his best an would appreciate more advise than crriticizim
 
Lizzie said:
C.O.H. I know you were only giving an opinion, but it's mean to just say "don't spend your time here" just try not to criticize too harshly : / he's doing his best an would appreciate more advise than crriticizim
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I'm just saying. But without harshness, people don't improve. People here must remember that :P

Ok back to the review. Quite simply you get a .00 but...you get a plus .01 because I've seen worse comics.

(Note: I'm reviewing these like "Screw These Comics")

Sprites: Well I gotta hand it to you, you used not used very often sprites. But you didn't give credit to the ones you didn't make. And you stole the concept of the spam monster. 0.0 because you get disqualified for not giving credit.

Backgrounds: No background? Simply a 0.0.

Story: It has a story atleast. But, why are they fighting? Why are they training? Why does the spam monster attack!? you get a 1.0

Special Effects: These are bad....bad bad bad...paint tools are obvious here. You didn't even bother to put the blast on the eye. 0.0

Characters: A godmodding author, and two stale fighting pokemon. They are all easily forgotten, all badly used, and all easily boring. 0.0

Humor:Could there have been humor attempted? Heck no! It didn't even make me giggle!

Spelling: Bad grammer, bad text boxes that change shape and size, 0.0

Yes this was easier on my keyboard because every mistake was out in the open. And I don't care if you guys defend him, because my opinion still stands.
 
sorry for double posting but heres the 6th comic part
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PS.anyone can still join if you only give the sprite!
 
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You could at least give credit to the sprites, thats a start... add a background so its not stale, improve the grammer a bit, and don't do the same thing that everyone else is doing because now almost everyone has a spam monster in their comic and that is unoriginal
 
Excuse me but didn't you read the last posts! Look your comic needs allot of improvement the last one was just boring 7 word 4 panel comic. You need more panels and GIVE CREDIT THE THE CREATOR THE OF HITMONCHAN AND HITMONLEE Here! or else i'm going to acuse you of stealing sprites. NOW STOP EGNORING OUR POSTS! WERE TRING TO HELP YOU IMPROVE!

EDIT: Why did you delete your post. Anyways last time I recall seeing any credit to thier orignal creators was never.
 
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Arctic Wish said:
Excuse me but didn't you read the last posts! Look your comic needs allot of improvement the last one was just boring 7 word 4 panel comic. You need more panels and GIVE CREDIT THE THE CREATOR THE OF HITMONCHAN AND HITMONLEE Here! or else i'm going to acuse you of stealing sprites. NOW STOP EGNORING OUR POSTS! WERE TRING TO HELP YOU IMPROVE!

EDIT: Why did you delete your post. Anyways last time I recall seeing any credit to thier orignal creators was never.
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I have to admit but you are 9 so
 
I agree with ArmadilloHD and Artic Wish . You have to give credit or your stealing. Also get some backgrounds. The comic is not that interesting in my opinion.
 
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