[YGO] "Dont know what to call this"...my little bros deck...be nice now

[Eternal Nightmare]

My little brother had the oddest idea and he wanted me to post his completly no theme, randomized deck here to get critque and suggestions. His spells and traps really screw me over so that's how I lose the majority of the time, which is said to say. I don't have that many good cards as I wish I did but meh I still lose to this deck of his. Having hardly any staples makes for the punishment of his spells and traps. I'm embarresed to admit I lost to this but here it is...

Monsters
Crimson Ninja
Gigantes
Miracle Flipper
Gundari
D.D. Trainer
Informer Spider
Handcuffs Dragon
Rockstone Warrior
Monk Fighter
Needle Worm
Poison Draw Frog
Paladin of White Dragon
Archfiend Soldier
Spell Striker
Moai Intercept Cannon
Twin Sword Marauder
Old Vindictive Magician
Spirit Reaper...hate that damn thing Dx
Dummy Golem...hate him even more
Armed Ninja
Penguin Soldier

Spells
Shrink
The Inexperienced Spy
Vicious Claw
Fissure
Burden of the Mighty
Soul Exchange
Restructer Revolution
Back to Square One
Pyramid Energy
White Dragon Ritual
Black Pendant
Autonomous Action Unit
Swords of Revealing Light
MST
Tribute to the Doomed
Stamping Destruction

Traps
Miniaturize
Trap Dustshoot
Negate Attack
Kunai with Chain
Straight Flush
Call of the Haunted
Magic Cylinder
Goblin Out of the Fryin Pan
Trap Stun
Sakurestu Armor
Final Attack Order
All Out Attack
Waboku
Dimensional Wall
Spell Vanishing
Penalty Game
Conpulsory Evacuation Device

As bad as this deck is he ALWAYS draws something to stall and reduce life points indirectly. His monsters are no threat as I said but you have really got to play it safe with traps like Magic Cylinder and Dimensional Wall around. Ugh...sometimes its so damn embarrasing losing to crap like this that makes you wonder if he's cheating. Anyway rate please.

 

[Apple Juice]

Too much random stuff. I suggest building Machina Gadgets. It will be easy to build and very competitive.

 

[Cirrus]

What he said.

Buy 3 copies of Machina Mayhem and you're golden.

 

[Apple Juice]

Well that's good but you should consider staple traps.

 

[Cirrus]

...Of course we need triple Fissure triple Smashing double Dust double BTH and singletons of Heavy, MST, Cold Wave (possibly), and Brain Control.

 

[Eternal Nightmare]

I told him to get Machina Mayhem but he refuses as he states "I don't like Union Monsters". I

I was alost there just 100 life points he had and I have Tuned Magician and Evocator on the field to his one spirit reaper. Used evocators effect bam sr is gone and hello Dark Valkyria. Ok so I attack but DWall hits me. I attack with Tuned Dprison then Dark Valkyria...Wabaku. I'm like wtf and that put me to at 1000 LPs. Then his turn Restructor revolution for 600 and then he summons Gigantes activates Pyramid Energy attacks Tuned and I lose -_____-.

^Lmao

 

[Kobold Asylum]

Looks alot like my troll deck. Just that it has maybe like 10 of the same cards at best.