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~My Poetry~

pink-tiger

Love in the Air
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    • This is were i'll keep all my poems.....hope u like them so much..its who I am an what I feel...

    Moonlight

    At night you see everything.....my shame, my hate....my heart...
    You who watches me every day at night...You're my moonlight..
    You're the light that comes from the moon to guide me....you who
    shine's on me on cold windy nights...You who I tell everything when you're there.....
    You're my moonlight....The one who listens. The one who understands....
    There's no other like you.......
    You're up there day and night....But you are my moonlight....
    My one and only moonlight............................Moonlight........
     
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    Midori Chi

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    • Few grammar errors, but the poetry itself is very good. ^^ I like the flow to this. The "....." show some good emotional pauses. Could you make your next one longer though? Your poems are good, so don't make 'em so short.

    *4.8 out of 5.0*
     

    pink-tiger

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    • Midori Chi said:
    Few grammar errors, but the poetry itself is very good. ^^ I like the flow to this. The "....." show some good emotional pauses. Could you make your next one longer though? Your poems are good, so don't make 'em so short.

    *4.8 out of 5.0*
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    Yes!!!
    I will do..I just wanted 2 see if they were good to be posted on poetry section....thanks Midori i'll work on the next 1!!!
     

    pink-tiger

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    • Heres another poem......


    Meaning of Life

    As I open the dood, I realize that the meaning of life passes before my
    eyes.. I then remembered what life's about...

    Life's a gift given to each of us, only we can choose how to live it...
    Life's something to appreciate, something not to waste.

    I now see the meaning of life through my eyes. And now I know how I lived.
    And I have to admit that as my life passes before my eyes, I've figured out that I have wasted life, but I also know I've used life to its limits.

    And although I do regret the times I wasted precious life, I have to admit that even if I spent life as well.........

    I'm glad of the life I have, and the life I lived. Im proud of who I was, and who I am.

    I know life's important, but there's one thing I love the most. And it's something life give's to us. And it's a family, that loves and cares for us.

    Life may be different for each of us, but there's one thing we all think the same. I dont think anyone could not care, because I'm sure we all appreciate. And it's the life we have and get. Because without it, we would'nt be were we are today...

    So if you have wasted life, don't worry.. ANd long as you know, you can start living it well....Just remember the meaning of life...
     

    purple-sweetflower

    Listen to the darkness.....
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    • Its realy good!!Inspires me a lot sis!!
    And it makes people realize what lifes all about!!
    This seems like it goes to everyone on pc.Cause it talks 2 everyone about the meaning of life!!clapp clapp!!! Good job sis!!
     

    pink-tiger

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    • purple said:
    Its realy good!!Inspires me a lot sis!!
    And it makes people realize what lifes all about!!
    This seems like it goes to everyone on pc.Cause it talks 2 everyone about the meaning of life!!clapp clapp!!! Good job sis!!
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    Yey!!!!I did good!!!!
    Thanks sis!!
     

    pink-tiger

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    • Here's my next poem:

    "My Love"

    My friend, I see you everyday
    and I must tell you some day...

    You may not know, but I can truly
    say...I love you...I know it's hard
    to accept...Sorry my friend.

    Time passes and I haven't said
    a thing. When you wrote to me,
    I blushed all day.

    When I read what you wrote,
    my heart grew with happiness
    ...And then I can truly say,"My love."

    As time passes by, we have a great
    time, and I'm happy to say,"My love."

    I seems like it's been years, but
    truly it's been three days. But already
    my love, I'm happier than ever
    before....Thanks to you,"My love."

    Together forever I wish to be. My love,
    I'm always with you..

    Difficulties will occur,
    I'm sure. But if you love me like I love you...our love will
    succeed...I love you..."My love."
     
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    Midori Chi

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    • Wow..I'm glad your poems are getting longer. ^^

    purple,-sweetflower is right. You're definetely improving..XD

    Keep it up, kay?
     

    pink-tiger

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    • ~ Feelings of Love ~


    I must tell you someday my friend
    That I have feelings for you
    I know it could change our friendship
    But I must tell you


    Its been a week since that day
    And you havent said a think
    I dont dare look at you at all, because I know i'll blush
    Im scared of what you'll say my friend


    Its been again another week
    And you finally looked at me
    You send me a letter with works i'll carry in my heart and mind
    I was happy that day my friend
    Because my feelingds for you have reached you


    Its been a while since that day you gave me that letter
    And im happy ever since
    My heart bumps when seeing you in the halls

    We walk together knowing we are together
    And knowing you love me as well
    And I know my feelings of love have been responded by you

    My feelings for you are really deep
    And I know your are too
    Together my friend we'll be
    And we'll soar together forever

    Umm I cant find the original 1 so..its a little sort..So when I find it i'll post it..is it okay?
     

    .: Kira Yamato :.

    .: Clyne Faction General :.
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    • Pink-chan, I love your poems, just as I said about Purple's poems, yours touch me as well...Keep up the great work ^-^, your last 2 poems remind me of my gf and how our relationship started and what she told me ^^ I am looking forward to the next poems. also if you want to be friends lease PM me if you like. ^^
     
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