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~My Poetry~

pink-tiger

Love in the Air
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    ♥ When You Came Into My Life ♥

    When you cane into my life
    Everything around me was the same
    But when your around you made it change

    When you came into my life
    You were my very best friend
    At that time I did not know why you were different
    Because at that time you were just my friend

    When you came into my life
    You were always there for me
    When I was happy
    And when I was in pain....

    When you came into my life
    I was never bored because you were there
    You always kept me company when I was alone

    When you came into my life
    Everyday I liked you more
    More that it past the loving you as a brother
    And I became happy, I dont know why
    It was a strange feeling, but I liked it..

    When you came into my life
    We became happy..
    I loved it..
    And im sure you did to...

    When you came into my life
    I was happy to see you smile at me
    Im glad to know that after all this time
    You still smiled at me happily

    When you came into my life
    And time passed by quickly
    As time passed by I did not notice..
    That we've become even closer..to each other..

    When you came into my life
    I was happy to finally be with you..
    So together we'll be for a while...
    And hopping our love will last forever........



    This I did for my pair...code zerro the deluge..
    Sorry if theres spelling errors^^
     

    pink-tiger

    Love in the Air
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    phantom_of_death said:
    *claps proudly* another one of your good works! this time...im really wondering...
    how do you get the emotions so...flowy and...well....lovely?

    anyways...good job. hey! im the first one to comment! waddya know? ^___^
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    umm thanks, umm you know I have no idea how I get it..I guess I just start writing and I dont even realize what I write..but at the end..I read it and its really nice..I guess I just write what I feel....
     

    Midori Chi

    ^.^
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    *smiles*
    This is one of my favorites of yours.
    I just LOVE it!
    I love everything about it.

    Keep up da good work, pinky! XD
     

    lateforwork

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    That was really good! I am very impressed and will probably wind up thinking about it a lot today.
     

    Emma

    愛
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    I like your poems ^^; I'm not really a type for poems but I still think those ones are really good :D
     

    pink-tiger

    Love in the Air
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    pink-tiger said:
    thanks people..and welcome lateforwork, and devastation...
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    ~ Best Friend ~

    You who's always there by myside
    You who I talk and share my secrets with
    You and I who are like siters
    You, you my best friend...

    The person who I call everyday
    The one I turn to when I need help
    The one who plays with me when im bored
    The person you are is my best friend

    My partner for everything I do
    My company when I make a sleepover
    My partner, my sister..your my best friend

    Although you may not be my sister
    I love you just like one
    Your the one I talk to when im down
    I just want to say something to you my friend
    Im happy to have you as a friend
    Your the best friend i've ever had
    Thank you for sticking by my side...

    Thanks for being my siter
    Thanks for watching over me
    Thanks for caring for me as well
    Thanks for being my best friend...

    For you i'll do anything
    For you I will soar
    For you my friend i'll do anything
    For youits all worth it..

    The future looks bright for us
    The present as well
    The love of friendship so srtong
    The meaning must be, we can go though anything

    You and I go far
    Our friendship shall last forever
    For I dont think we shall let go
    We will forever hold on to our friendship...
    Since after all we are best friends...

    I hope thers no misspelling or grammer things..
     

    ThEoNeAnDoNlY555

    They call me..."Darkness"
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    i really like your work. i just took the time to read all of your poetry. it was all very good. i like your style very much. your most recent one is the only one i will comment on though.

    there were a few spelling errors. hehe. you seem to have uber trouble with that. one complaint i have is your word choice. it all seems to flow. but with your word choice i think you could make a stronger impact. using larger and most complexe words to fill your space would make your poems overall quality much better.

    but as i said. your poetry is amazing.​
     
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