"You and I are friends"
"mumble"
Those are the two I caught, but other than that, it was a nice poem. I think it would be stronger with a few different word choices. Remember, you don't get very many in a poem (unless you're me, who can ramble on and on in a stanza... I just never seem to know when to stop...), so make everyone count! Use words that taste good on your tongue and sound good when you read it aloud. As silly as you might look, reading your poetry out loud to yourself can reveal a lot of things- like rhythm error, rhyme error, and just general areas lacking.
It was a good poem, though! Keep up the good work!
