Recent content by Sladazo

I keep playing, and restarting some games, just because I want to use different or uncommon Pokemon. For example, a few weeks ago, I restarted LG just to use Pokemon like Jigglypuff and Drowzee (I restarted to remember the storyline as well though). I also like battling, that's never gotten old...

The next chapter, still just cropping up the current storyline and characters. Please point out any mistakes and give your advice. Chapter Two "You know, it feels nice knowing I'm going to be away from Azalea for a while," Jordan said. They had just passed the well and were continuing on to...

Due to certain reasons, I couldn't complete the previous two fics I've posted here, but here is one I am determined to finish and not leave hanging. I don't believe anybody will have a problem with anything contained in the story, so don't be scared to give it a try. Constructive criticism is...

The Legend of Zelda: Phantom Hourglass Future games will be to finish all my Pokemon and Final Fantasy games, then buy the rest of the Zelda games I need and finish them.

In XD, I was trying to use unique Pokemon, but after losing to Greevil a few times, I had to replace a few of them since they just weren't going to work. Espeon (The only one I didn't replace) Electrode Donphan Swalot The last two slots were always Shadow Pokemon anyway.

I thought it was a pack of regular Pokeballs, and he ends up giving them to you. That's just how I interpreted it though.

Okay, the second chapter. Figures as soon as I finally post it, I forget most of what I wanted to say in the first post after having remembered it afterwards. But what I do remember: the title of the story seems strange, but it's the line that made me write the story. It taught me something...

I kind of went absent after signing up for this, but I did finish the Kanto challenge. However, I would like to be removed from the list if that's okay. My Silver messed up, and it's probably not going to ever be fixed, so I won't be able to finish it, even if I do Hoenn and Sinnoh before it...

I haven't been on for forever, and when I got back, it took me a whole week just to catch up with the story. I'm finally done though, and I have to say, your story is one of the greatest Pokemon fanfics I have ever read. Leah is definitely my favorite character; I just love how she acts. Ed is...

Just got to Vermilion, and didn't even plan on using any of these Pokemon as my normal team. Wartortle - Level 20 Tackle Water Pulse Tail Whip Withdraw Raticate - Level 20 Tackle Quick Attack Focus Energy Hyper Fang Mankey - Level 20 Scratch Low Kick Leer Karate Chop Bellsprout - Level 18...

Not a big variety, but a big list: Pokemon Colosseum - Just started, at Pyrite. Pokemon LeafGreen - Starting right after this. Final Fantasy VIII - On my way back to Balamb Garden. Final Fantasy X - About to cross the Moonflow. Final Fantasy XII - Training in Lhusu Mines. I'm going to try to...

To me, it sounds better than how I have it currently worded so I'll change it to your suggestion. Once again, it sounds better than how it's currently worded in my opinion, so thanks again. That seems like a true, valid mistake on my part, thanks for finding it. I don't think I normally have...

I have a lot to say. First of all, I'm not sure what I would rate this, probably either T or M in literature terms (provided by the rules). The Prologue should be as bad as it gets, so whoever reads this, please help me decide on a rating. Next, the plot of this story will not be apparent...

It'd be nice if you don't give it much thought, but when you do, it gets scary. Like the person above me said, a Rhyperior's Earthquake or a Gyarados's Hyper Beam would be pretty scary, deadly and dangerous.

Just like delongbi above me, I'm interested to see why Leah is afraid of the storm if that's why she's acting strange. I saw a couple of errors, but I can't find them anymore. They were all minor though, nothing to worry about. Great chapter, you described Cinnabar really well in my opinion.