Oh DJ, I'm revising E-Anon. So far, I've:
-Reduced Giovanni's whining and lessened some of his really vile remarks
-Fixed spelling errors
-Changed some bad metaphors (but I'm keeping the awful pokemon metaphors because I can :3)
What else should I do? I'm having trouble making Giovanni more likable... the problem is I want to stay true to canon, but I also don't want him to be so awful that it's impossible to read about him.
-Reduced Giovanni's whining and lessened some of his really vile remarks
-Fixed spelling errors
-Changed some bad metaphors (but I'm keeping the awful pokemon metaphors because I can :3)
What else should I do? I'm having trouble making Giovanni more likable... the problem is I want to stay true to canon, but I also don't want him to be so awful that it's impossible to read about him.