MISFITS [OOC]

[Quest]

lol I just drew Raike :D
I only just started humans too, and this one is a headshot, will upload soon

I totally wanna see your Badarse swordsmen!!! XD, I'll have mine within the next week in manga/anime form.

 

[Rena Ryuugu]

Just a few quick sketches of Kylie, I know, they're not great -_-"

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[Quest]

They're really good for quick sketches!

EDIT: NOt final but here...

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It's just not rebellious enough to be my charrie, I considered it but Blah...

 

[Feign]

Online now, reading/catching up.

 

[Skymin]

okay, seriously guys we have a little bit of a problem here: post length and grammar. Three sentances is NOT OKAY. Use detail, adjectives! VERBS. ADVERBS. WHATEVER! Also, remember NEW SPEAKER, NEW LINE. It's 6th grade stuff. Also, please, no posts that are just un necessary. If you're going to post, at least do something. I don't want no excuses, grammar and punctuation is an easy thing to do. I find it easy to punctuate by talking it out in my head as I write it.

Just to let you know, I'm aiming this at Liliana, The Final Watchman and (only mildly to) SkyIsUmbreon. But that goes for everyone else.

Also, just a thing to keep in mind: your character only knows what they know. I mean, if someone thinks something and another character mentions it later, how do they know? It's like names, your characters shouldn't be familiar that well with eachother's names. Even when your character isn't speaking and you're just typing text, it should be "that guy with the stuff."

I've never kicked anyone out of a RP before but if you don't step up your game, I might have to.

 

[Feign]

;_; sooooo many posts.

So if I get this correctly, people met up the next day and a fight was breaking out, and now it is solved, and that is it so far?

 

[Skymin]

Okay, yeah. The fight's not solved yet, Kylie let go of Toby so I still have to post.

The truth is, badasses gravitate towards badasses, and in Chuck's mind, this was a chick who didn't look at explosions.

OH GOD I LOVED THIS.

EDIT: Chadlington, I don't really get what's happening? Get Will just to come down the the community centre.

 

[Feign]

Hummm, gonna have to reread. At least I can say that my character was in his Porsche the whole time, and only coming out after witnessing the fight. Though I would like to try out an early portion of my character's developing powers. XD

 

[Skymin]

Go for it! Remember, mild! I'm letting Grims have fiery arms since emotions usually set these things off.

 

[Sweet Dreams]

I figure mine's mild enough since the characters in question are in the same room as him and he can't control it and it seems to be physically weakening him. Right? RIGHT?!

Ahem. Anyway. Gosh, all those posts! Phew! All this enthusiasm is draining. :P

 

[Feign]

I think I'll play with your character. Something like suggesting your character do something. It'll sound a lot better once I post it though. Hopefully within the hour.

My character's powers sort of manifest (besides from touch or eye contact) due to his passion in disrupting people. Thus if that makes any sense, it sort of doubles on what he is already doing.

EDIT: we almost need to slow posting down just so that everyone can get in a few posts, without being too much of a bystander. XD

It's okay at least in my case though. But I suppose when we all write, we'd have to make sure of the amount of time that passes by within the RP.

 

[Skymin]

I've opened the door and somewhat ended the fight so it should give everyone a reason to get inside. The probation officer is not there yet, just remember that.

EDIT: @feign just be wary. you can only do it when you are touching/direct eye contact and the commands should be small. OKAY COOL. :D

 

[Feign]

It'll be more like a suggestion (with intent and a side of malevolence), leaving it open ended for your character to react as you see wish.

 

[Skymin]

okay okay, good good. :D
well, once everyone gets in a good post, i'll get along with the story.

 

[Feign]

There you go :P have fun ;)

This is perhaps the reason why I didn't have work so much :3

 

[Skymin]

i think you should rethink your power test. d:

 

[Chadlington]

Everyone knows will didnt go in today right?? I hope thats ok...

 

[Feign]

Psh a slight set back :P I just wasn't as descriptive, then again, if I am with someone who knows how to RP, then a lot of my "backfires" are only a result of passive reaction. :P

Poor Will, and furthermore poor Aaron. Who will Aaron have to play with? Oh wait, there is Toby! XD

 

[Skymin]

EDIT: Chadlington, I don't really get what's happening? Get Will just to come down the the community centre.

I said this before, because I didn't really understand. Plus, you skipped the whole day and the rest of us are still in the morning.

 

[Chadlington]

ok..i'll quickly edit it and get him to come down. Sorry I was at work and trying to keep up and also participate. It was a very unproductive day. haha But im home now. Im all yours!

OK its all edited and i moved it down to the bottom. Is that better?