Well, since you want comments on your maps, here you go(you've gotten better):
The 1st is a bit empty.. besides that, the door on one of the buildings bug me..
The 2nd has a kind of fence against the road leading out of the town, which I don't like that much..
The 3rd has water on the mountain, which is different than the water right beneath it. I basicly don't like the water.. and the ending to the right is kind of simple(the same all over)
The 4th is pretty good, except one empty spot in the middle
The 5th will get trouble with the right connection, because it will look weird anyway (too much open space)
The 6th is probably your best, but you have a weird fence that doesn't fit in, and and there's a werid til combining the tree and the mountain-tile
But you've had a lot of progress.
Anyway, your hack looks interesting, especially the story.
I'm sorry that your rom crashed, but again, now you've got more experience continuing;)