Hey Guys, I'm sorta new at fan fiction, but I'v been writing something for a little bit, here it is
Any errors, compliments or critiques, just post!
Any errors, compliments or critiques, just post!
Fire Island [contains volcano (Mt. Flame) & hotel]
Grass Island [contains forest (Bulba Forest) & hospital]-
Thunder Island [contains powerplant]
Water Island [ferry, Pool, Lake Squirt and hotel]
Clear Island [PokeCentres and PokeMarts]
Moon Island [Hotels and Mt. Night]
Sun Island [Hotels, Town Centre, Ferry and Mt. Day]
Psychic Island [PokeCentres and PokeMarts]
Rock Island [Fighting Dojo and Mt. Bruno]
----!!New Islands!!----
Bug Island [Beetle Forest & Lake Marquerain]
Dark Island [Small Island off Moon Island]
Dragon Island [Dragons Den, Hotels & Training Gym]
Fighting Island [Fighting Dojo & Mt. Machop]
Flying Island [Avory [Egg Centre], Hotels & PokeCentre]
Ghost Island [Haunted Tower & Training Gym]
Ground Island [Mt. Trapinch & Desert]
Ice Island [Frozen Cave, Ferry & Poke Mart]
Normal Island [Small Island off Clear Island]
Poison Island [Poison Cave & Training Gym]
Steel Island [Mt. Steel, Hotels & Training Gym]
Shadow Island [Small Island off Moon Island]
It was a Sunday morning. Madelaine Ryder (or better known as Maddy) was fast asleep on her bed. It was the day of her 10th Birthday, the day she had been waiting for, all her life. The day, she would receive her first pokemon. But being fast asleep didn't get her anywhere. It was almost 7 o'clock, and she was supposed to meet up with Professor Palm, the town's PokeCentre's owner.Maddy lived in the Elemental Islands, a new set of islands that had been recently found. She lived in the ClearIsland, and in a town called WhiteTown.
The clock struck 7, and the alarm on Maddy's went of, quite loudly. She awoke with a start, and then suddenly remembered what today was.
'I'm going to get my first pokemon today!' She thought excitedly.
She quickly got up, and got dressed in the adventure clothes she had been waiting to wear for weeks. It was a pair of gloves, bandana, a sleeveless shirt, a long pair of jeans, and specially made shoes for adventuring. Maddy was so excited, she tripped over several times. When she was fully dressed, she grabbed the backpack she had packed the night before.
"Where are you going Maddy?" A voice coming from the kitchen yelled out.
"I'm going to Professor Palm's lab, mum, she said she would give me my first pokemon today!" Maddy yelled back.
"Okay," Maddy's Mum replied. "But come back to show me, I heard that there are new pokemon around!"
"Okay, see you!"
Maddy left the house and walked the way to the lab. White Town was only little town, so everyone knew everyone. She said hi to the people standing outside of their houses while she walked by. The PokeCentre was at the top of the hill, so it was hard to get to. As she finally reached the tower, a boy, around Maddy's own age, came out of the PokeCentre.
"Hey, how's it going?" He said as Maddy went to walk past him. "I'm Kai, what's your name?"
"I'm Maddy," she said quietly in a shy voice.
"I just got my first pokemon, wanna see?" He said with a faint tone of boastness.
Maddy's courage perked up a little. "Yeah, alright!"
Kai took a pokeball of his belt and yelled "Go! Skarmory!"
Out came a silver bird with red wings about half the size of Kai. It shrieked and flapped its wings.
"It's beautiful, isn't it?" He said while he adored his new pokemon.
"Wow, it's so small, I didn't think you'd get one like that!" Maddy beamed at the Skarmory.
"Neither did I, but Prof. Palm is one of the best breeders in the world, she gives out the hatched eggs to the new guys, like me and you," Kai said proudly.
"Can you help me get a pokemon?" Maddy asked shyly.
"Yeah! Sure, I'll show you where you have to go!" Kai said with a smile.
He returned his pokemon, walked her into the centre and showed her around.
"There's the front desk, there's the phones and there is the lab!" He pointed at a desk, several phones and a set of double doors.
"Let's go in then," Maddy walked over and pushed open the double doors.
"Whoa!"
The room was filled with eggs, young pokemon and older ones in glass pens. A young woman was in the corner, rubbing an egg while telling pokemon off for fighting. She noticed Maddy & Kai looking at a pair of blue eggs and walked over to greet them.
"Hey, how are you Kai? Back so soon? And who's this? A newcomer?" Prof. Palm said with a warm smile.
"Yeah, this is Maddy, she lives at the white and blue house, at the bottom of the hill, she's looking for her first pokemon," Kai replied, gesturing towards Maddy.
"Ah, I know your mother. Okay a new pokemon? We have plenty! Pikachus, Clefaries, Natus, Pidgeys, Tailows, and even a baby Lugia, which washed up on the beach, but I'm afraid that she isn't for taking," Palm said, pointing towards several pokemon.
But Maddy wasn't listening. She was staring at a small, brown, fox-looking pokemon. It had a tuff of cream fur under its neck, a bit or cream fur on the bottom of its tail and about the size of a shoe.
"What's that?" Maddy interrupted, pointing at the pokemon.
Prof. Palm looked towards the small, shy pokemon and sadly said, "That's an Eevee. It was the runt of the litter and hasn't been able to get a good home."
"I'll take it!" Maddy said happily.
Kai went to stop her. "Hang on a second Maddy! You want a pokemon that's good and tough! It needs to protect you out in the wilderness!"
"Kai, it looks fine. Don't worry. Professor, can I have it?"
"Yes, of course you can have her, I'm sure she'll love that," Palm said with a big grin.
She picked up the Eevee and put it in Maddy's hands. It was only small so she had to have a firm grip to keep it up.
Maddy went to put Eevee on the ground when Palm stopped her.
"That wouldn't be wise," Palm said with a slight note of laughter in her voice. "You don't want Eevee to be squashed!"
Maddy nodded and put the Eevee in her backpack, so the Eevee would have her head poking out. Kai rolled his eyes as Maddy cuddled the Eevee.
"You better go now, I'll see you later!" Palmed waved at them.
"Bye Professor!" Maddy & Kai said as the left the centre.
Maddy had started walking down the hill when Kai stopped her.
"What is it?" Maddy asked him.
"Um, well it's just that when I go on my adventure tomorrow, I don't want to go alone. I mean without someone I can talk to. But, I wanna ask, can you come with me tomorrow?" Kai said nervously.
Maddy thought for a moment and said, "Yeah, sure, I'd love to!"
Kai blew a sigh of relief and started to walk down the hill with Maddy.
"Thanks, thanks a lot," Kai said.
"That's okay, I don't want to go "alone" either," Maddy said with a smile.
"Okay! See you tomorrow!" He head off in the left direction at the end of the hill, as Maddy headed to the right.
"Eevee!" a tiny voice chirped from Maddy's bag. Maddy lifted Eevee from the bag and held her like a baby.
"You and I are leaving tomorrow," Maddy said as she wandered to the door of her home. "I hope you're a
really good battler."
"Eevee!" Eevee squeaked happily.
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