Sarcastic Prince
Starting anew...
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- Kwun Tong Mountains
- Seen Nov 18, 2015
Hey, Xatoku. I played the Beta and I think it's awesome!
Gold has pretty bad drawing...
Anyways, here are some glitches (Mostly Grammar Errors).
It wouldn't make sense if you start with "GOLD:" because Team Rocket's talkin' to ya.
The name "Karen" only has one "R". And do you have plans for making Karen's OW?
You missed a period at the end of "battle".
It should be "its" not "it's". They have different meanings, y'know.
It should be "name's" not "names".
Oh, and one more thing. Do you plan to add my character later in the story?
Gold has pretty bad drawing...
Anyways, here are some glitches (Mostly Grammar Errors).
It wouldn't make sense if you start with "GOLD:" because Team Rocket's talkin' to ya.
The name "Karen" only has one "R". And do you have plans for making Karen's OW?
You missed a period at the end of "battle".
It should be "its" not "it's". They have different meanings, y'know.
It should be "name's" not "names".
Oh, and one more thing. Do you plan to add my character later in the story?