Paige, you need to include more content in your post.
SBaby, you can improve your RPing by instead of putting who's talking, just make a paragraph with each charecter's actions, words, and thoughts, like this example:
Eclipse looked up at the dim sky, covered in clouds. "Shauni, you liar, you said it'd be clear so we could see tonight's aroura!" She said, slightly annoyed. The large black scyther would like nothing more then to be in a town doing what she did best: killing.
"Okay, fine, I admit, these powers arn't perfect." Eclipse's Dragonair partner said, flicking her tail aginst the ground. suddenly, the glass orbs on her tail and neck glowed, and the clouds above parted, revealing the brilliant colors in the sky.