Alriiight, review time. Now keep in mind, I suck at these. But here we go. :DD
Morisu - Morisu's right ear [it's right, not yours] isn't the same size as the left ear. Try slimming down the bottom/base of the ear just a bit so it matches the left more closely.
Another thing I'd like to point out is the leaves at the top of it's tail... they're very random and just kind of stick out, which isn't very attractive. The fact that the leaves stay exactly the same [they don't get bigger, grander, more complicated, etc.] throughout each evolution is rather dull as well. :( But, with a little imagination, that could be fixed easily. :D
Lastly, the mouth/teeth are lopsided. Other than that, though, Morisu is very cute. :3
Morikai - There's the same ear problem, except switched. One is bigger than the other.
The front paws/feet shouldn't be on top of the back paws/feet. It makes Morikai's position look awkward. Just move the front paws a little so they're more in front.
Lastly, I don't see a lot of change between Morisu and Morikai. The body shape, tail, ears, and color are all the same. However, the eyes are very good. :D
Hayashirisu - The back of the head is very bulgy, and the area around the base of the tail is too thin. Flip flop the sizes and it'll be good. :D
Nothin' much else except the front leg - the part where the leg meets the body is WAY to huge. That bit needs some serious slimming down. Also, is Hayashirisu's right paw [it's right, not yours] supposed to be turned in, toward it's body? If so, I think it would be better just to keep like the others, with the claws facing outward.
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Okay, I'm gonna tone down the reviews here, since there's no color.
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Fire Starter - Only complaint is the toes on the front paws - they're very smooshed and thin. Flatten and extend them a little, and this'll be really good. :DD
2nd - Front legs are a little thin, and the eye is huge. Also, the stomach is a little thin. Feed it some cake. :DD
3rd - Again, the front legs are a little awkward... it doesn't look like they have any muscle. :/ Also, what are the random things coming out of it's back? XD Ribbons? :P
Water Starter - Besides smooshed front paws again, can't find anything else wrong with this one. :D
2nd - The chest is very thin. Poor kitty needs lungs to breathe! ;__; XD Anyway, the back legs look very cool. Nice job. :D
3rd - Nothing really wrong with this one. :)
Most Common - Very cute, but the arms could be a little smaller.
2nd - I like this one a lot. No comments. :)
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Nothing much to say about the PokeDexes, but I suggest you clean up and straighten the lines a little, they're rather crooked. But, I'm sure you'll do that whenever you get around to re-dong them in Corel. :) The designs are very nice, though. They could be official. :)
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Skitty 1 - Very well done. Only thing is, the yarn ball isn't round enough. Other than that, good job. :)
Skitty 2 - Only complaint is the Skitty's butt is too high in the air. XD Fix that, and this'll look really nice. Good coloring, too.
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Shinji 1: Awwww :3 So cute~ Nothing wrong with this one. <333
Shinji 2: Don't see anything wrong with this one, either. :D
Shinji 3: The ears are a little lopsided, and the head is too big. Other than that, very cute! :333
Shinji 4: The body is a little awkward - it's rather hot dog shaped. XD Also, the tail is really stiff and rigid.
Shinji 5: Nothing wrong with this one. The legs/arms are perfect~<3
Shinji 6: The body is way too small, and the head is too big. Lots of proportion issues here. :(
Alright, reviewed! :) Overall, your drawing style is very good. Only a few minor problems, but other than that, you've got skill! :DD
Also, I like the way you drew the Fakemon. Your style is very unique and you have a good way of showing expression. :3