Let me see... Like Ark said, the buildings are not in the correct place. Another thing is that if a building isn't important, there either 1. You cannot touch the building or 2. The building should not have a path. The place seems too empty. Add more unimportant buildings or put less space. The ground is also too empty. Add flowers, or snow since it's on a mountain, stuff like that. The mountain seems very unnatural. Make the hills more natural with curves and things like that, instead of rectangles. Paths should always remain the same width, and I think it should be 3 tiles wide. If you don't understand something, you could ask me. And, yeah... I do too much walls of text these days...