yuuichi's pixel art

[Vednix]

no offense, but these are terrible, sorry. Use a variety of shading, and use darker outlines, as they tend to look better.

This fire one, shoctunshi, or whatever it is, has the saem backsprite as the frontsprite, you just chopped the bottom off.

t's good that your sprite have a distinct shape, but with the 3 new ones I can see no limbs, just a whole much of colours.

No offence, but read tutorials and priactice. A lot.

 

[Kyouya]

Use a variety of shading, and use darker outlines, as they tend to look better.

they have shading
Shoctunshi(fire) is coming from the middle where the fire is strongest causing more light

shockunshun(thunder) the light is simple to see so theres no use in pointing out

tsuntunshi(water) do you expect water to cast a shadow or even show light for that matter

This fire one, shoctunshi, or whatever it is, has the saem backsprite as the frontsprite, you just chopped the bottom off.

its the back of the head look closely at both
the body back sprites on show the top half
how different on both sides do you expect fire to be

t's good that your sprite have a distinct shape, but with the 3 new ones I can see no limbs, just a whole much of colours.

even though thnder fire and water shoudnt have limbs they do

arms are circled read
legs are circle yellow

 

[Vednix]

they have shading
Shoctunshi(fire) is coming from the middle where the fire is strongest causing more light

shockunshun(thunder) the light is simple to see so theres no use in pointing out

tsuntunshi(water) do you expect water to cast a shadow or even show light for that matter




its the back of the head look closely at both
the body back sprites on show the top half
how different on both sides do you expect fire to be



even though thnder fire and water shoudnt have limbs they do

arms are circled read
legs are circle yellow

1. I mean that the shading makes it look like the lighting is from everywhere. heres a tip: say the light is fropm the top right. draw a red circle there so you know that you make the shading around the fact that the lgiht if from the circle. easy.

2. Oh wow, you took the little humanoid face off the sprite, chopped the bottom off and claimed it the back sprite. look at the backsprites of other pokemon. they have them facing towards the top right, and the fonts sprites facing to the bottom lef tor the left. you have it facing fowards and its backsprite facing towards the top lef,t not the top right.

3. ok fine, but put some darker outline and shading underneath where the limbs are, adding a shadow and thus making it easier to see the limb.

I wasnt commenting spiecifically oin thos sprites, but on all your sprites. keep practing, and keeps these things in mind.

 

[justdieplz]

These are....different... Keep trying at it though! You WILL improve! :)

 

[Kyouya]

These are....different... Keep trying at it though!

i dont get it are you complimenting by saying different or insulting

 

[Vednix]

i dont get it are you complimenting by saying different or insulting

I think hes saying that they're not like other sprites that people do. I would say they're extravagant, and oddly mishapen. but that's just me.

 

[Kyouya]

my first try at making a tile

 

[Vednix]

again, the shading is horrible. and it's too blocky, and doesn't look 3-d like most sprites do. and how do you know this would actually fit correctly into a tileset? Also, it isn't symetrical.

 

[Kyouya]

again, the shading is horrible. and it's too blocky, and doesn't look 3-d like most sprites do. and how do you know this would actually fit correctly into a tileset? Also, it isn't symetrical.

first of all this is my first try at a tile
second of all this isnt a sprite
3rd it wasnt made to fit in a tileset
and fourth and foremost a tile doesnt need to be symetrical

 

[Vednix]

first of all this is my first try at a tile
second of all this isnt a sprite
3rd it wasnt made to fit in a tileset
and fourth and foremost a tile doesnt need to be symetrical

First if it's your first time then don't post it up
second it is a sprite becuse it's made in pixels, much like every building and tile in the pokemon games., that's no excuse for poor shading.
3rd ok, I was just checking.
fourth if it'd a building it might need to be. but I guess it's your chioce.

without any shading it's going to look so out fo place and horrible in a hack or RPG

 

[Kyouya]

My latest creation

 

[.Tactic.]

that is good!
I can now see progress - are those ripped or scratched?

 

[Kyouya]

that is good!
I can now see progress - are those ripped or scratched?

ripped an edited a little

i actually just went to rip the thing with the pokeballs but i ripped more

 

[.Tactic.]

cool - good progress - you can rip now - i want to see more scratch sprites though!

 

[Kyouya]

cool - good progress - you can rip now - i want to see more scratch sprites though!

ive been able to rip i ripped stuff before but at first i just planned on using this thread for my sprites but i got bored
and i have alot of scratch already

 

[.Tactic.]

Hmmm... but from the comments youve been getting I'd say you need to make more scratch - that way you can improve - there is always room for improvement!

 

[Kyouya]

Hmmm... but from the comments youve been getting

Its only vednix giving critism that isnt really constructive

I'd say you need to make more scratch - that way you can improve

Most of what i make is scratch sprites

there is always room for improvement!

Same for you

 

[.Tactic.]

Its only vednix giving critism that isnt really constructive

Most of what i make is scratch sprites

Same for you

I am saying that there is always room for improvement...

That applies to everyone!

Nobody is perfect!

 

[5qwerty]

My latest creation

Well, technically, if you ripped, then edited, it wouldn't really be called your creation.

There's also a possibility that you didn't edit, or rip because:

1. I saw that silver sprite from another hack.
2. You could've went on a site like Spriter's Resource, and copied some of the sprites, then put them in paint, and then put together that picture above.
3. They don't look edited, and if edited, and editor will always keep the full sprite. (the top of your house is gone)
4. I know this is editing and ripping, but judging from your skills so far, it seems you can't even edit. (not saying you can't, it just seems that way)

Maybe you can look at a tutorial for spriting, like Chesu's spriting tutorial.

 

[Kyouya]

Well, technically, if you ripped, then edited, it wouldn't really be called your creation.

There's also a possibility that you didn't edit, or rip because:

1. I saw that silver sprite from another hack.
2. You could've went on a site like Spriter's Resource, and copied some of the sprites, then put them in paint, and then put together that picture above.
3. They don't look edited, and if edited, and editor will always keep the full sprite. (the top of your house is gone)
4. I know this is editing and ripping, but judging from your skills so far, it seems you can't even edit. (not saying you can't, it just seems that way)

Maybe you can look at a tutorial for spriting, like Chesu's spriting tutorial.

1. you probaly did since i only edited 1 or 2 and silver is ripped one oth ones just ripped
2.i didnt go to spriters resource i went to the hg/ss image overhaul theread and ripped them from screen of hg/ss
3.the screen didnt have the top half
4.and if it seems you dont know its true which means its your opinion and if your opinion isnt constructive than keep it to yorself