View Full Version : True love,rated pg-13 for mild language and fantasy and gun violence.

April 5th, 2008, 2:56 PM
Hi...now to begin the book.


1year after ash left for another region,dawn's mom decited to go to canalve city for the summer"But momm!"dawn wined."Dont but me little lady" "I hate you!" "If your going to use that language at me then go to your room!" " Fine I will!" "Good!" SLAM,dawn slamed the door."F*** you mom"dawn said silently."What will I do with that girl"

"I can't believe you made me come"dawn said."I'm your mother and I have the athority to do that,we're here!" "Hey,Yall"A guy said."Hey cosin eddy!"her mom said"Dawn meet your uncle eddy" "Great,a hill-billy" "Sorry,she's upset about this trip" "I'd be to knowin about all the nightmares goin around" "You dont believe that darkrai legend do you?" "nope" "I'd rather risk my chances with darkrai than come here"dawn pouted."That may jinx you little lady"

Careful With That Axe, Pichu!
April 5th, 2008, 11:17 PM
Read the rules! I'm not moving this to the Bin because it doesn't qualify as a story as it is now. Please improve this piece and post it after. Thanks!