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[destinedjagold]

again, I'm bored, but I hope you'll like this poem, and this time, it rhymns. :laugh:


I can see the water,
flowing down the river,
if love comes to a teenager,
then out comes a love letter,

so if you receive a love letter,
hide it well from your mother,
if caught, she'll tell your father,
dead comes your lover...

:P

[Sydian]

xD

That's great.

Although, I think my mom would have a go at my boyfriend rather than my dad.

I love eet. <3

[Toblerone]

Me too! Nice poem, i liked it!

[Binary]

The peom is great <3 The first two lines don't really relate with the poem though...
But this really teaches us a lesson, lol.

[Superjub]

The poem is funny yet good. Your father will kill your lover XD
I doubt my dad would do that, unless he killed a family relative or something.
Funny yet excellent.

[Tamaki]

Aww, that's sweet :3 You're a good writer~