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Moon Dreamer
December 8th, 2008, 10:10 AM
since i love writing and sharing it with people i figure i could start my own thread here.

to start it off here is one of my pieces:

i call it everlasting love: dancing in a pink swirling mist,i hear the wind whisper your name.
an enchanted feeling of happiness overpowers my heart when i start to
think of you, my dreams become clear whenever i picture you in my mind,
i've always admired you from both near by, and far away. i await the day when
you finally see the real me underneath a mask of shyness.

December 8th, 2008, 11:09 AM
Great love poem, you have a great talent! Have you been to allpoetry.net (not a forum...lol) yet? They have a great poet community (huge! lol) and you can get great great feedback threre.

December 8th, 2008, 2:11 PM
Poem threads go in the poetry section. I'll move it over to that sub-forum for you.

Moon Dreamer
December 8th, 2008, 3:55 PM
ok thanks astinus ^_^ i really love this new site

Moon Dreamer
April 11th, 2009, 5:33 PM
dreams last forever so why not do the impossible
imagination is the key to all kinds of wonderful things both big and small
all you have to do is open up your heart and let go of all your fears
love all and all would love you back as you dream of good stuff to come