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Sting of the Season

Shadow

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    • Here is a small little promo I made to celebrate the winter season. A beloved Ice Pok?mon, Sneasel. Comment and post any errors you see. ^.^
    sneasel.jpg
     

    Gokey Shuckle

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    • PokemonChampion2K4 said:
    I like it keep it up I give it a 8/10
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    Uhhh..No offense, but give a reason why it's 8/10. No matter what it's always helpful to give your advice for a card and what that person can do to improve.

    Anyways, here's my rating

    ~Art/Originality: Ken Sugimori art seems to be blurry, I don't know if you ment to have it like that. The attacks are original too. 9/10
    ~Placement: Placement is perfect. However, you should change the length of the effect text to 96% instead of 89%. Due to a recent discovery, thats what it's suppose to be. 10/10
    ~Brokeness: The PokeBody is good and the attacks seem to be even. Good work 10/10
    ~Usabilty: Very usable, but I think there suppose to be a 20x regardless since your doing damage to "Defending" Pokemon. 9/10
    ~Fun Factor: A Very fun card to use!!!! Indeed good job. 10/10

    TOTAL: 48/50 ~ Good Work!
     

    MiNuN*

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    • SUP SHADOW! XD

    ART: Some originality here. Though a bit fuzzled. 3/5
    TEXT: Justify thing working.. but Frost Nova; lil overpowered. 4/5
    PLACEMENT: Nice.. 5/5
    MISSING: Your rarity. Or the Promo Icon. 3/5
    NAME: Good job; though still can adjust XD 4/5
    OTHER: K00l.. 5/5
    OVERALL: Good stuff as always. 24/30
    COMMENT: Trying not to be too fancy, yet not too boring, k00l man, just what I like to see. XD
     
    Shadow

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    • PiroMunkie said:
    Yeah, the art is blurry, but I think it was mean't to be that way. It seems like he is still going fast or whatever. I still think the Poke-Body could be worded better, but I don't have any examples. It may be fine, just me being a dork. Anywho, I like it.
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    Pokebody wording was based a little on Rocket's Secret Base or whatever but it could be wrong for newer cards.
    King Shuckle said:
    ~Art/Originality: Ken Sugimori art seems to be blurry, I don't know if you ment to have it like that. The attacks are original too. 9/10
    ~Placement: Placement is perfect. However, you should change the length of the effect text to 96% instead of 89%. Due to a recent discovery, thats what it's suppose to be. 10/10
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    Art is blurry because its going fast. Sneasel is a fast Pokemon so it's going fast. =p And the width is set at 96%... If it looks wrong then it's Photoshop's fault, not mine.
    MiNuN* said:
    MISSING: Your rarity. Or the Promo Icon. 3/5
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    I wasn't aware of a promo symbol for newer cards.
     

    MiNuN*

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    • Oh and your font size needs to be bigger. It looks awkward like the way you did it there.
    Pokebody image is supposed to be in line with the text. E.g
    - [POKE-BODY] Shiny Armor
    - Whenever you attach a blah blah vblah balh balh
    [c][c][c][c][c] Hyper Beam
    You cant attack next blah blah blah blah blah blah
    Not..
    [POKE-BODY] Shiny Armor
    Whenever you balh blah blah blah
    [c][c][c][c][c] Hyper Beam
    You blah blah blah blah blah periods.

    Anyways, if you dont understand that then my new card will be a perfect example.
     
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