Nameles comic

This is my first attempt at a sprite comic please tell me what you think and what I should improve... and please do remember that I suck at coming up with jokes.
~Part one~
~Part two~
~Part three~
~Part four~
~Part five~

*NOTE* the comics are only three screens big because otherwise they exceed the limit imageshack allows.

not bad but your pics are to big try and make a smaller pic of where he is and add in speach bubbles

Thanks for the comment but, my speech bubbles are horrible so I'll just use ''the color tells wich person is speaking'' system.

seems ok if you put it that way whell its still better than what i did last time i made a comic

hey smarty do you have trainer sprites of yourself like the ones in games?

it's not terrible, I really ahve nothing against it, i just don't find it that ammusing, you made 1 typo, which is in the slide where he knocks the old man iover, the Y looks like a V

Well, you just started the comic so I'm not really going to rate it just yet ^_^ Though, Part 1 confused me a bit..shouldn't the first panel be on the right? o_O Well, keep at it smarty_arty! =D

No it shouldn't. The first panel shows what happened after he got out of the lab the lab part was a flashback.

Oh..well I see ^_^ Well as I said, keep at it =D

I will but, not before tomorrow I'm feeling really lazy today ^__^

Okay since no one has replied in a long time and I'm done with the two next parts I'm going to make my first double post. The parts 4 and 5 are now up.

Hey, they're not bad. The first ones remind me of how I started, but don't worry, I can see you doing better in the future. If you want some trainer sprites just tell me, OKAY?^.^

Well I can make my own trainer sprites, but thanks for the offer.