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Pok?Moon

Ciro

A Cat with a blade..
204
Posts
18
Years
    • My next comic, I hope I can keep this one going....


    POK?MOON​

    Story​

    Jet Jakotsu is a 17 and has just got a job at the Lilycove City Safari Zone. Its his first day on the job, all workers at the Safari Zone get to catch a Pok?mon from there if they don't have a starter Pok?mon already. Before Jet can catch his Pok?mon he was asked to go out to the lake near the center of the Safari Zone to feed the Pok?mon living in the lake. As soon as Jet gets there he sees a shadow under the water. What is under the water? And why is it there? You'll have to wait and see....​

    Characters​

    Jet Jakotsu

    Pok?Moon


    Not much is known about Jet yet.​

    Teh Comics​

    Episode One: Jet​

    Credit​

    Avatar- Jet/Birdkeeper OW​
     

    Ciro

    A Cat with a blade..
    204
    Posts
    18
    Years
    • Jet got a job at the Lilycove safari zone and he was about to feed the water pokemon when he sees the shadow. I'll have more comics up on friday.
     

    Ark Kuvis

    467
    Posts
    19
    Years
    • hmm....well.
    See, The speech bubbles are VERY similar to Pokechow's. As do the emotions. You may want to give credit there.
    aswell, the text touches the borders of the bubble.
    and you should put more than 2 pannels in your comic.
     

    Ciro

    A Cat with a blade..
    204
    Posts
    18
    Years
    • The POKE is blueguys but the speach bubbles were made by me
     

    Weatherman Kiyoshi

    ~Having one of THOSE days
    3,543
    Posts
    18
    Years
    • well if theres olny one character,

    I'll be in it!

    what I am: a talkin torchic

    name: Riku

    personality:
    really nice (but don't get him to angery)

    moments: I really think everyone knows.

    p.s. just a friend never caught unless its drama.
     
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