Pok?Moon

[Ciro]

My next comic, I hope I can keep this one going....

POK?MOON​

Story​

Jet Jakotsu is a 17 and has just got a job at the Lilycove City Safari Zone. Its his first day on the job, all workers at the Safari Zone get to catch a Pok?mon from there if they don't have a starter Pok?mon already. Before Jet can catch his Pok?mon he was asked to go out to the lake near the center of the Safari Zone to feed the Pok?mon living in the lake. As soon as Jet gets there he sees a shadow under the water. What is under the water? And why is it there? You'll have to wait and see....​

Characters​

Jet Jakotsu

Not much is known about Jet yet.​

Teh Comics​

Episode One: Jet​

Credit​

Avatar- Jet/Birdkeeper OW​

 

[Matt Silver]

Cool start. BUt i have nO idea where this is goin.
Keep at it. (1st PosT)

 

[Ciro]

Jet got a job at the Lilycove safari zone and he was about to feed the water pokemon when he sees the shadow. I'll have more comics up on friday.

 

[Ark Kuvis]

hmm....well.
See, The speech bubbles are VERY similar to Pokechow's. As do the emotions. You may want to give credit there.
aswell, the text touches the borders of the bubble.
and you should put more than 2 pannels in your comic.

 

[Ciro]

The POKE is blueguys but the speach bubbles were made by me

 

[Weatherman Kiyoshi]

well if theres olny one character,

I'll be in it!

what I am: a talkin torchic

name: Riku

personality:
really nice (but don't get him to angery)

moments: I really think everyone knows.

p.s. just a friend never caught unless its drama.

 

[PKMN trainer]

nice but its really short .