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Vey good. Ienjoyed this very much. The title caught my eye, which gave the impression on an interesting story. Funny AND intersting. Just a tiny bit of development is need, not alot. All in all a 10/10. Hoping to see more fics from you in the future.
I was improving it a bit already, QFred gave me some advice over MSN, but I?ve been a little occupied lately, and not in the mood to write really. ^_^;
I?ll try to write a new chapter and improve these two chapters soon, it?s just because I am now hatching for a Shiny Torchic, and that IS time consuming. XP