3 Runasutarus and a Knuckle Sandwich!(PG-13, Sonic the Hedgehog Fanfic)

Runasutaru

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    Cool, I like it!
    I like the relationship of Wakachamo and Runasutaru evolution of the fic!

    It could be more developted, though!
     
    Vey good. Ienjoyed this very much. The title caught my eye, which gave the impression on an interesting story. Funny AND intersting. Just a tiny bit of development is need, not alot. All in all a 10/10. Hoping to see more fics from you in the future.
     
    Thanks for your review Mort Rainey!

    I was improving it a bit already, QFred gave me some advice over MSN, but I?ve been a little occupied lately, and not in the mood to write really. ^_^;

    I?ll try to write a new chapter and improve these two chapters soon, it?s just because I am now hatching for a Shiny Torchic, and that IS time consuming. XP
     
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