Slowly, Surely

^^NICK^^ v.3.0

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    *I know it's in the wrong section, sorry. Could someone move it, please?*

    Slowly, surely

    I step onto my porch

    Surely I don't move that slowly, usually

    But today is especially special to me

    Slowly, I make my way

    Surely, it'll make my day

    Knowing ours will never fray

    Love, that is

    That is is important to me

    Is how you or me

    Or us you see

    Could never be without it

    Slowly, I trudge anxiously

    But surely, to the bus stop

    My heart drops as I think of you

    True and blue

    Just like glue

    Forever I hope we're together

    Surely the bus arrives

    Slowly the the bus driver drives

    I get on, happily, excitedly

    I pay the driver, then I sit

    I cannot believe that I'm about to meet up with you again

    Our love, like the mayflower making a pilgrimage of devotion

    In hopes of new discoveries, fun things to see

    But not without hardships along the way

    And giving thanks of any given day

    Slowly, but surely

    I get there, I beware that you be wearing that shirt you told me about

    Surely you are

    Slowly I breathe, get off the bus, say thanks to the driver, but not making it far

    Far without you jumping into me

    My arms catch you, midair

    I swear, we'll never let go

    This grip that you stole, the love of this hold

    With that, we have a special flare

    Like crushed pineapples in syrupy delicious sweet potatoes on Sunday dinner

    Sugary sweet describes our love, it comes from within our

    Hearts, and with this we shall never part, til death do us

    But from the start, we can hardly see the end

    So let's just pretend, for now, that somehow we'll last enternities

    Like oceans, fueled by the breeze, flowing beyond what our eyes can see

    And these seas, slowly drifting into the horizon

    Surely     do not have the depth to contain my love for you​
     
    Wow....despite it being in the wrong place, It was incredibly good.
    "So let's just pretend, for now, that somehow we'll last eternities"
    That just hit me like a ton of bricks, and I just realized how much this related to me.
    I mean, it was weird, but it was good at the same time.
    Truly a good piece of work. Thanks for posting it here ^-^
     
    Thanks, I'm really glad that you could relate. I wrote it when I was bored in science class one day. Science is where I write my best work.
     
    Wow, that was a very good poem. I mean it, very good.
    Bra-vo!! *gulf claps*;)

    {{Raven's Phoenix/Lust's Veyron}}
     
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