EmeraldSky
Make the Colors in the Sky!
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This week, our heroes happen upon a carnival and a Lore Stage, where they help a girl with a Natu overcome stage fright and deal with Kamon in the process.
The biggest change was genderflipping McKenzie--in the original, McKenzie was a boy, but even though I know it is a unisex name, I've always felt it made more sense on a girl, and so I made McKenzie a girl.
Another major change was replacing Team Rocket with Kamon (as this sort of plot sounded like something he would do), and cutting out the battle at the school--after replacing Team Rocket's Pokemon with Kamon's Pokemon, that part of the battle no longer made sense, so it was cut. Also cut was McKenzie practicing with the Wooper mask--I felt like McKenzie had rehearsed beforehand, but her problem was remembering the spiel.
Carnivals were also perfect to put in a Lore Stage for Brock--even though he didn't get his blue stripe, he does know how to lose gracefully.
Next time, our heroes help out a young balloonist, grappling with Team Rocket on the way!
The biggest change was genderflipping McKenzie--in the original, McKenzie was a boy, but even though I know it is a unisex name, I've always felt it made more sense on a girl, and so I made McKenzie a girl.
Another major change was replacing Team Rocket with Kamon (as this sort of plot sounded like something he would do), and cutting out the battle at the school--after replacing Team Rocket's Pokemon with Kamon's Pokemon, that part of the battle no longer made sense, so it was cut. Also cut was McKenzie practicing with the Wooper mask--I felt like McKenzie had rehearsed beforehand, but her problem was remembering the spiel.
Carnivals were also perfect to put in a Lore Stage for Brock--even though he didn't get his blue stripe, he does know how to lose gracefully.
Next time, our heroes help out a young balloonist, grappling with Team Rocket on the way!