EmeraldSky
Make the Colors in the Sky!
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This week, an unexpected ally returns when the admins try to crash a relaxing afternoon!
This was one of those episodes that translated very nicely from Team Rocket to Team Galactic. I was originally going to keep the battle in, but decided it would be funnier to just have Brock shot the admins down, and then they bicker for the rest of the time. (Ash does acknowledge Team Rocket because of how the admins try to capture Tintri, Kori, and Aaron's team.)
I moved Aaron's backstory with his Beautifly Farfalla into in interlude expanding on the athletic center to make his reunion with Farfalla more meaningful. I also expanded on the athletic center to include things for the humans to do as worldbuilding, character development for the humans (and show they had and have more interests besides Pokemon.) and a breather for the audience.
Next time, Diddy evolves, but the evolution has an unexpected side effect!
This was one of those episodes that translated very nicely from Team Rocket to Team Galactic. I was originally going to keep the battle in, but decided it would be funnier to just have Brock shot the admins down, and then they bicker for the rest of the time. (Ash does acknowledge Team Rocket because of how the admins try to capture Tintri, Kori, and Aaron's team.)
I moved Aaron's backstory with his Beautifly Farfalla into in interlude expanding on the athletic center to make his reunion with Farfalla more meaningful. I also expanded on the athletic center to include things for the humans to do as worldbuilding, character development for the humans (and show they had and have more interests besides Pokemon.) and a breather for the audience.
Next time, Diddy evolves, but the evolution has an unexpected side effect!