EmeraldSky
Make the Colors in the Sky!
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This week, Kamon gets into more trouble than he bargained for, spurring the others to try and save the Holy Land. But even among the flames, Kamon is able to find redemption.
The major change I made here was replacing Team Rocket with Kamon, and giving him closure. I actually used some of Kamon's lines from the original GSC for the scene where he asks forgiveness of Ash, Ethan, and Lyra. You'll see what becomes of Kamon in the epilogue.
I also expanded on Swanna Song lore, and how it can also calm enraged or berserked Pokemon. I considered leaving the guardian Dragonite unnamed, but decided to give her a name, which only a rare few know, for the sake of establishing her as important.
Now that Kamon has closure and Team Rocket will get their send off in a few episodes, all that is left to write is Misty's final Pokethlon medal and the Johto League itself.
Next time, it takes Ash's Swanna Song to calm the guardian Dragonite!
The major change I made here was replacing Team Rocket with Kamon, and giving him closure. I actually used some of Kamon's lines from the original GSC for the scene where he asks forgiveness of Ash, Ethan, and Lyra. You'll see what becomes of Kamon in the epilogue.
I also expanded on Swanna Song lore, and how it can also calm enraged or berserked Pokemon. I considered leaving the guardian Dragonite unnamed, but decided to give her a name, which only a rare few know, for the sake of establishing her as important.
Now that Kamon has closure and Team Rocket will get their send off in a few episodes, all that is left to write is Misty's final Pokethlon medal and the Johto League itself.
Next time, it takes Ash's Swanna Song to calm the guardian Dragonite!