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Could it be because that member's first fic was it's own disaster? It's always funny when people review, and they give advice that they should take for their own writing. Though you can laugh at the fact that he mentions grammar mistakes, when there's only one capital letter in all three sentences, and a serious abuse of commas. Won't somebody think of the commas? ;o;