You're misunderstanding me. Your entire thread was saying what you wanted in your hack/ outlining the story, while leaving out your introduction which is the one thing which is absolutely necessary in order for your thread to be approved. If you don't have it, you won't be approved. Simple as that. Your chances will really improve if you read the rules and have a look at currently approved threads to see what constitutes an introduction.
And I'm sorry, but circular logic isn't going to get either of your threads approved. If you're stuck and not getting any help from the question threads then there's nothing stopping you from contacting more experienced members privately to ask for their help in solving problems. Better yet, if you could work through those problems by yourself you would be even stronger than you are now :)