Not a problem! Let's see, going through in order...
'Sounds like a dream' is a literal translation, and I wasn't sure what else to put in.
Good catch on the 'son' thing, just didn't occur to me, I'll change that right away. 'Hon' and 'Dear' sound more like terms of spousal endearment to me, so I just removed the word entirely.
The colon was in the original, and to be quite honest I don't remember where the hell the contest map is and it was difficult to find to begin with.
Fixed.
Fixed, my shift key is sketchy.
Fixed.
That's... really bizarre. Would you care to go at least that far in my current version (which I'll send you) to see if it recurs? I don't need you to start from scratch completely, but at least get to central city in a new file... I tried the contests a few times, and I didn't have that happen, but I'm not sure if I ran into a Scraggy in there, and I've obviously edited more things since then. Check your PMs in like five minutes.
Also, thanks for the really thorough beta-testing, I'll definitely keep sending it to you as I got more done. :D
PS: Not sure if you're quite that far yet, but keep an eye out for a master ball ;)