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Bump. Wow, it's been awhile, eh? I'm going to continue on this, but I would REALLY like a review of Complications. The next chapter should be up soon...like, today soon.
MEEP!
A/N: Huge thanks to Dagzar from PokeCommunity and Copper Hikari and Rtas from FanFiction for reviewing. You guys keep me inspired :D
Ok, first battle time! It won’t end the way you are expecting.
Chapter Five
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“A dreamer is one who can only...
Thanks to Dagzar (PokeCommunity) and Copper Hikari (FanFiction.net) for reviewing!
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“None of us knows what the next change is going to be, what unexpected opportunity is just around the corner, waiting a few months or a few years to change all the...
Came with the quote.
Don't worry. Ichiro and Karin are the only Japanese names in the story. And Karin is a Grade 7 uber-minor character, soo...
Ichiro doesn't know anything about this world. He puts up with Kenny because Kenny will fill him in on some vital details. Also, Butch has abusive...
I had a huge reply responding to all your comments. F**king server issues >_>
I'll add the reply later, setting up Comcast stuffs.
IT'S GOOD TO BE BACK :D
I couldn't wait to write this. It's longer than both my first two chapters combined. Here it is...Chapter THREE!!!
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C H A P T E R T H R E E
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“Let your mind start a journey thru a strange new...
Sorry for the double post, but I need reviews in order to stay inspired and know what to improve on. So, yeah.
Also, if someone reviews by this evening, I'll upload some pics I drew of Ichi, ages 17 and 10 :D
Chapter Two is now up, baby!
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C H A P T E R T W O
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I didn’t know when I had fallen asleep. I had spent the entire night immersed in my thoughts, and sometime during, I...
/me looks at the length of the Lounge.
I f***ing love the Search feature.
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Edit: Ok, so here's my fanfic in a nutshell. 17 year old Pokefan. On 18th birthday, sent into Pokeworld, for some reason, only 10 years old. My current idea for the plot is to have him attend...
I'm brainstorming Chapter 2 for my fanfic, Shinzenbi Okugi, and I was thinking, do kids in the Pokemon universe even GO to school? I mean, seriously. And when they turn 10, do they drop out or something?
Thank you both for the reviews and criticism. I'll work on that in chapter three, now officially Chapter two, like you asked, which will be up tomorrow.
EDIT: I fixed several minor problems that were pointed out, and edit the two chapters into one. Enjoy.
Title: Pokemon: Shinzenbi Okugi
Rating: PG-13 (for language and more bad-a** things than you're used to in Pokemon! This is the LAST time I will be censoring anything. Just so you know.)
Disclaimer: I don’t own anyone or anything. Everyone belongs to their own creators.
Summary: It's...