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Title: Pokemon: Shinzenbi Okugi
Rating: PG-13 (for language and more bad-a** things than you're used to in Pokemon! This is the LAST time I will be censoring anything. Just so you know.)
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone or anything. Everyone belongs to their own creators.
Summary: It's Pokemon fanboy Ichiro Ishihara's 18th birthday. But little does he know, he's about to embark on an epic adventure in the world of Pokemon. But there's a trade-off...
A/N: PLEASE comment and review my work! I am desperate for critique! This is my first fanfic. If you have any ideas, PLEASE post them to keep this idea alive!
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My name is Ichiro Ishihara. Today is my birthday.
I'm a big fan of Pokemon. I own all of the games except for one, Pokemon Platinum, seeing as I live in the United States. I'm hoping to get that for my birthday. Some people would find it odd that a 17-year old teenager would still be as into Pokemon as I am, but I see nothing wrong with it.
I am pretty good-looking, if I do say so myself. I've got medium-length brown hair, which I like to let hang into my intense blue eyes. I had a decent physique, seeing as I went to the gym every week. I was also really tall, hitting a growth spurt around 13 and shooting up like a weed since.
My room is full of a lot of Pokemon-themed items. I have posters hanging up, a Pokemon clock, and, most impressive, a large shelf containing all my games, mangas, DVDs, comics, and other items of that nature. I was turning 18 today, and my parents had a small party all set up for me.
It wasn't much, really. There were a few small things, a couple of T-shirts, but nothing really big. We finished off the Pokeball-shaped cake pretty fast, and I went up to my room to hang up my new clothes. I looked out the window and noticed the rain had picked up. I really hoped it didn't get too bad. I really don't want to hide out in a closet because of a tornado warning on my birthday.
I walked into my room. There was a gift laying on the bed. I didn't even need to read to notice my girlfriend's signature on the packaging. Her name is Karin, and she's just as big of a Pokemaniac as I am. I laid my clothes across my bed and opened the gift. It was a really big box, but for some reason, it was really light. I tore it open and saw a lot of crunched paper. In the middle was a copy of Pokemon Platinum. God, I love that girl.
I was thrilled. I popped the game into my DS and began playing. I lost track of time as I sat at my computer desk playing the hell out of that game. I was already at the second Gym when I decided to take a quick break. I glanced a look at the clock - it was seven minutes to 11:23, the time I was born. I laid my DS down and counted down the time under my breath.
Five...four...three...two...one...suddenly, a white, blinding light shone from my DS and blinded me. I shouted in shock, and heard a crashing as the window broke. The storm had picked up and water was rushing into my room. I tried to maneuver around the room, but the light made it impossible to see. I tried to make it to the door, but the water on the floor made me slip.
I fell towards my shelf with all the Pokemon stuff on it. I braced myself for impact, but nothing came. I opened my eyes and saw nothing but blackness. I tried to move, but was held in place. Suddenly, my body was burning. If I could have screamed, I would have. I clenched my eyes closed, wishing for the pain to end. It did.
I slowly opened my eyes. Where was I? It was a bedroom, but it wasn't mine. There were lots of Pokemon items, but none were mine. Hell, I had never seen any of these kind of products. There were figurines and carpets. The place was totally decked out in Poke stuff. I was about to start looking around when I noticed the bed. It seemed...taller than a normal bed. I looked up and saw a black figure and tried to make out what it was.
What I saw on the bed was a real life Eevee. It purred and leaned a bit towards me. I stepped back in fear, but tripped on something. In horror, I looked at a mirror positioned in the room. I saw a small boy staring back, eyes wide under his tangled brown hair. He was wearing clothes that were much too large, which was what he had tripped on. His shirt covered almost his entire body. My brain registered what I saw and came to one conclusion...
I had been turned into a ten-year old kid.
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Chapters one and two edited into one. Enjoy, and review...please.
Rating: PG-13 (for language and more bad-a** things than you're used to in Pokemon! This is the LAST time I will be censoring anything. Just so you know.)
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone or anything. Everyone belongs to their own creators.
Summary: It's Pokemon fanboy Ichiro Ishihara's 18th birthday. But little does he know, he's about to embark on an epic adventure in the world of Pokemon. But there's a trade-off...
A/N: PLEASE comment and review my work! I am desperate for critique! This is my first fanfic. If you have any ideas, PLEASE post them to keep this idea alive!
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C H A P T E R O N E
.: b e g i n n i n g :.
.: b e g i n n i n g :.
My name is Ichiro Ishihara. Today is my birthday.
I'm a big fan of Pokemon. I own all of the games except for one, Pokemon Platinum, seeing as I live in the United States. I'm hoping to get that for my birthday. Some people would find it odd that a 17-year old teenager would still be as into Pokemon as I am, but I see nothing wrong with it.
I am pretty good-looking, if I do say so myself. I've got medium-length brown hair, which I like to let hang into my intense blue eyes. I had a decent physique, seeing as I went to the gym every week. I was also really tall, hitting a growth spurt around 13 and shooting up like a weed since.
My room is full of a lot of Pokemon-themed items. I have posters hanging up, a Pokemon clock, and, most impressive, a large shelf containing all my games, mangas, DVDs, comics, and other items of that nature. I was turning 18 today, and my parents had a small party all set up for me.
It wasn't much, really. There were a few small things, a couple of T-shirts, but nothing really big. We finished off the Pokeball-shaped cake pretty fast, and I went up to my room to hang up my new clothes. I looked out the window and noticed the rain had picked up. I really hoped it didn't get too bad. I really don't want to hide out in a closet because of a tornado warning on my birthday.
I walked into my room. There was a gift laying on the bed. I didn't even need to read to notice my girlfriend's signature on the packaging. Her name is Karin, and she's just as big of a Pokemaniac as I am. I laid my clothes across my bed and opened the gift. It was a really big box, but for some reason, it was really light. I tore it open and saw a lot of crunched paper. In the middle was a copy of Pokemon Platinum. God, I love that girl.
I was thrilled. I popped the game into my DS and began playing. I lost track of time as I sat at my computer desk playing the hell out of that game. I was already at the second Gym when I decided to take a quick break. I glanced a look at the clock - it was seven minutes to 11:23, the time I was born. I laid my DS down and counted down the time under my breath.
Five...four...three...two...one...suddenly, a white, blinding light shone from my DS and blinded me. I shouted in shock, and heard a crashing as the window broke. The storm had picked up and water was rushing into my room. I tried to maneuver around the room, but the light made it impossible to see. I tried to make it to the door, but the water on the floor made me slip.
I fell towards my shelf with all the Pokemon stuff on it. I braced myself for impact, but nothing came. I opened my eyes and saw nothing but blackness. I tried to move, but was held in place. Suddenly, my body was burning. If I could have screamed, I would have. I clenched my eyes closed, wishing for the pain to end. It did.
I slowly opened my eyes. Where was I? It was a bedroom, but it wasn't mine. There were lots of Pokemon items, but none were mine. Hell, I had never seen any of these kind of products. There were figurines and carpets. The place was totally decked out in Poke stuff. I was about to start looking around when I noticed the bed. It seemed...taller than a normal bed. I looked up and saw a black figure and tried to make out what it was.
What I saw on the bed was a real life Eevee. It purred and leaned a bit towards me. I stepped back in fear, but tripped on something. In horror, I looked at a mirror positioned in the room. I saw a small boy staring back, eyes wide under his tangled brown hair. He was wearing clothes that were much too large, which was what he had tripped on. His shirt covered almost his entire body. My brain registered what I saw and came to one conclusion...
I had been turned into a ten-year old kid.
I continued to stare into the mirror, not believing my own eyes. I pinched myself to make sure I wasn't dreaming. It hurt. I slid out of the overlarge clothes and looked at myself. I was as scrawny as I was 8 years ago. All those years of going to the gym didn't show – I was as thin as a stick.
I pulled the overlarge shirt back on, not having any other clothes in sight. I glanced back at the bed and saw the Eevee from before, looking at me. It jumped off the bed and moved towards me. I stumbled back and tripped over the shirt. I froze as it moved towards me and sniffed my foot. I didn't mention this before, but when I'm something of a coward. And I was terrified of this cute Pokemon.
It continued sniffing until it got to my face. I didn't move a muscle. It got closer and...it licked me. I blinked in surprise. I tentatively reached out a hand and slowly petted it. It purred and curled up near me. A half-smile showed through my boyish features. I thought to myself, Where am I...and what happened to me?
I stood back up and walked to the room's closet, hoping to find something to wear that actually fit me. I grabbed a shirt and some pants, along with a pair of underwear. I hoped they fit. I slid the clothes on silently...for some reason, they fit like a glove. I went back to the mirror to see what I had picked.
I was wearing a shirt with a Pokeball design on it, along with some shorts. I still flinched when I saw the little boy looking back at me – it still hadn't really sunk in yet. I looked at a clock situated on the wall – it was 11:34 AM. Only a few minutes after I officially turned 18...or in this case, until I reverted back to 10 and was transported to this strange world. I turned on a small TV and turned on the weather.
The weatherman was talking about regional weather. He said, "The weather for the Sinnoh region is looking up. Jubilife City might see some rain, but everyone else can look forward to some sunshine."
I turned off the TV, soaking in his words. Sinnoh region? It can't be...
I ran to the window and opened the curtains – which wasn't that easy, considering my short stature. I pulled myself onto the window sill and looked out.
It may have been the dark playing tricks with me, but the layout of the buildings and the small crystal-clear lake reminded me of Twinleaf Town, the starter village in Diamond/Pearl/Platinum. But it couldn't be...
I dropped from the windowsill and clambered onto the bed. I stared at the ceiling, immersed in my thoughts. I thought of my parents, and Karin...but one thought stuck out most of all...
What happened?
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Chapters one and two edited into one. Enjoy, and review...please.
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