Recent content by Arylett Charnoa

I hate to say this, but I'm closing down the RP. Some personal real life nonsense I don't really want to go into involving totally unexpected events. I already have enough on my plate to deal with my other projects on top of this nonsense that just cropped up. So my sincerest apologies, you...

Yes. But they are still referred to by their original gender.

I specified that she was in Facility 1 in the first post of the thread. In any case, I'm going to be completely honest and say that I am ridiculously incompetent when it comes to imagining the interior of buildings, so if anyone wants to take a stab at making something up, go for it. I'll add...

Arylett The matter of the small yellow spider bursting in out of nowhere eluded her as she once again had her attention being yanked in all directions. It was always so chaotic when they added new Hylics, but there was something about today that seemed particularly... annoying. She focused her...

Oh? Well, that sounds quite annoying. Hopefully, your next first post won't get messed up. Arylett was giving her lecture in Facility 1. He fell in there.

Arylett Her mane only bristled more upon hearing his voice, as she hid her scowl behind an illusion of stoicness, finishing her tending to the wounded. One of the unaffected newcomers had addressed her, and she briefly turned to face him. This poor soul had no idea what he was in for. She...

Arylett With little time to think, the perception of an enemy suddenly in front of her overtook her mind. She let out a startled yelp, and swung her arms into the ground as she unleashed a crimson burst of darkness towards him. At the last second before it hit him, she managed to redirect it...

Looks like that was something I missed in editing. I wrote some of those a while ago. It's been fixed. Sorry about that. ^^; I see you're placing even more of an emphasis on avoidance. I have no problem with any of the changes. I'll just give you a tip though. In my experience, as an RP goes...

There are no real animals. As for conditions, it varies depending on your character's behavior. A typical Hylic gets put into some barracks with minimal beddings, all close to each other. This is where they sleep and spend their time when not working. They get fed a meager amount. A favored...

Gotcha. Thanks for clarifying. Whoa, this is quite good. I am impressed. I really like the little story you wrote, it makes it more believable. Good changes, great job on expanding what the Thought looks like. If you're all wondering where the thread is, it's currently under mod approval...

OOC Thread Arylett A creature stirred in the cover of her bedding, slowly getting to her feet. Dressing herself as if she were still a human, this creature dawned her cape and her glasses, and quickly groomed through her voluminous mane with her claws. Her groggy posture immediately...

Not Accepted. If I'm honest, I don't think you'll be able to improve your grammar enough to be to the standards of this RP. I'm having trouble understanding your posts due to odd wording and constant mistakes. It appears you don't have the best grasp on English, which I don't mean anything...

Accepted! Good changes. I get a much better idea of him as a person. I particularly like the detail with him being more focused on his work ethic than relationships with others.

Just let me know when you make the changes so I can have a look at it again.

Accepted! Just one question - which law did he break? Did he just break all of them during those ten years? Since I see you mention "many laws were broken" From what I'm reading here though, it appeared he broke the Second Law from attending the resistance group rally. If you could clarify or...