Recent content by AssassinPrince

[[Hello everyone! I know it's been quite a great deal of time since my last chapter post and I apologize for those of you who are still reading it! I hope you'll be renewed to keep reading with this newest installment! It took me time and effort and more thought than I thought possible to get...

Chapter 4 - The Hall, The Prison [Dau Lang Town Hall: City Complex of Municipal Headquarters and Police Operations] "Adam, what do you think?" "Hmm, what?" "I asked if you thought we should move ahead with the next part of the plan?" "Oh, yes. Right, of course. Well..." "Well what?" "I...

Chapter 3 - The Cell "Welcome to your new home for the next several days." The guard laughed as he tossed a young man by the arm into a holding cell. The boy hit the ground as his long, shaggy, dark brown hair covered his eyes and dirt flew into his face. "You'll be comfortable here. Just like...

Thanks Rediamond for your advice and critique! I appreciate the useful feedback and will definitely keep what you've said in mind for future posts and the chapters to come, as well as make needed revisions to the prologue. Any other advice in the future is greatly appreciated as well! Cheers...

Chapter 2 - The Race The entrance to the city Dau Lang, capital city of the new unified region of colonies is busy today. Merchants gather here frequently, but today they collect en masse. A fray of locals have arrived unknowingly to welcome two young men. Two outsiders have entered the city...

Thanks to all of you who have made this whole process of settling in easy and relaxing. I appreciate all the positive comments and advice, and look forward to chatting with each of you hopefully in the future! If you all have a chance, I did get the first chapter of my fanfic written and posted...

Chapter 1 - The Desk and the Window "So, what do you think?" "I think it's the most ridiculous and impossible plan I've ever heard." "Oh come on. We both know what the people have been saying. It's about time for a change. The need far outweighs whatever actions we must take." The dark...

Hello everyone. So, I'm new here and was told I should post an introduction in the welcome lounge. While I am not the best with words, I will try. My favorite types of Pokemon are any type really. I'm a connoisseur and enjoy collecting and caring for all different Pokemon. I do have a love for...