Recent content by Azurne

Apologies that I'm absurdly late here, I just have a few random suggestions that might either help or just find a comfortable spot in the dusty corners of the internet. What about a random chat room get-together once or twice a year? Jax and Astinus have already brought up previously that it's...

That's why I said it was my favorite if done correctly. Because you're right, a good number are just copies of each other with no real plot and have zero impact - but that doesn't mean I'm going to write off the whole sub-category as being terrible. Horror is one of the easiest genres to screw...

Script fics generally have me backing out faster than anything else. Even when I was required to read professional scripts for high school it was a chore because I simply didn't like the format. Badly written script 'fics' on any writing forum/website make me lose a little more faith in people...

I'm not into shipping fics, but I do think this was genuinely well done~ My favorite part was the paragraph with Silver describing his pokéball - about how the two halves would never separate because they needed each other. The main concept of Silver needing to find a 'key' to happiness and...

I don't think the comma after 'dusty' is necessary and only slows your sentence. Burns? What kind of burns? I realize you're probably going off the pokémon special manga, but not everyone has read it and this leaves us scratching our heads wondering what's happened here. Maybe you can spend a...

Hey my word isn't concrete, either. I'm not much of a poet at all really and there are times where I do screw up reading something. It happens most often in poetry, go figure. I think you'll simply have to find someone else to read it to get a better judgment. It didn't detract from the poem as...

From a Wise Man: I know you wanted to evoke a strong image here with the proud sun shining bright, but when you're reading it really trips up your line to have an extra adjective in. I keep trying to read over it again, but it doesn't flow as smoothly as the first two stanzas before it. The...

I'm not sure I like the word 'lass' in this. I honestly can't place my finger on why - I think it might be because it's stuck in the middle and didn't seemed like it belonged. Not entirely sure. =/ I think this would sound better as 'all this for what, you ask?' I know you mentioned there's no...

I think it's nice to read once in a while, although admittedly I'm one of those people what doesn't quite 'get' poetry and probably doesn't appreciate its utmost quality. I do like to read a little such as Robert Frost and the occasional poetry in a textbook, but for the most part I simply don't...

I tried skimming through a couple of stories and decided I'm simply going to wait until I can legitimately read it. Two reviews in one day wouldn't be that hard for me personally, but I'm not sure about anyone else. I just don't really think it would be fair to writers that I'm guessing what...

*Casually slips in late* Best Way To Contact: Doesn't matter, I look at everything! :3 Reviewing Style: I try to be as detailed as possible, but with a month of reviewing to do I might slack a little. ^-^; Grammar isn't my strong point though, so I won't touch on that (much). Custom Challenge...

I think a new thread is fine, since it would help keep each month clear and separate without people having to click through pages of past challenges to see what's going on. If the majority really want it all in one thread though, some editing for the first page might be needed to make it clear...

*Prods the awkward silence* Since April starts on Friday, do we post in this thread to keep track of our reviews or is someone going to be making a monthly thread? Also, I take it the rules from last time about the fic/poetry needing to be updated within the past month are still in effect?

I'll side with Bay and Misheard Whisper over here and concur that this was adorable. I think my favorite part has to be the very end when Maisy declares her eternal love for Ethan. I sat here giggling a silent 'you go get 'em, girl!' at my computer screen. This is also partly random, but This...

Hello~ First off, there’s really no need for spoiler tags around your story. If someone hasn’t backed out of your story after reading your disclaimer and rating, then it’s not your fault. It’s just looks nasty is my opinion to have to expand the whole thing. Also, you may want to go back and...