Recent content by Banov

Thanks, Eon. About the titles; they're all named after stages in the archetypal "Hero's Journey." Google it. Right on time, here's chapter 3. This one took a lot of editing and rewriting to come out right! It's put me a bit behind schedule, but with inspiration and luck the last 2 chapters...

We're brothers now. Bwahahaha... that means I'll do brother things, like mooch off you for money and eat all your favorite food out of the kitchen before you get to.

Wow, very good. Emotional, tense, raises a lot of intriguing questions and puts the main character in an interesting fix. Very original. Right now, the only thing I can say about it tha might be improved is the pace; this was an excellent start, yes, but as chapters go on I hope it's not going...

My apoloies, sir. Perfect example: This conversation comes off as very forced, and the option to evolve eevee right away strikes me as some kind of cop-out. Dawn's overzealousness does help us remember this is intended as PARODY... but, I feel that you could have tried to make it more natural...

Wow, how about that. I was just browsing through at Serebii, read through some chapters, figured you had enough reviews as it was, and come here to find the same thing... with no attention at all! That's just criminal. But having read just the first couple chapters, I'm afraid I have nothing...

Awesome. I don't think blimps are made of leather. Be more thorough in your description here. Flygon isn't just "a green dragon." How does a document look 'official'? What? Peacefully. Bonsly have no legs really worth stretching, just tiny feet. =p The scene at hand bears no resemblance...

@Techya: Yeah... mankey is pretty badass. You gotta love him. @ Protrainer: Hehe, you won't be disappointed. @Bigfoot: Wow! Thanks for the kind words. I wouldn't really call this a "Journey" fic, though. It's more just a plain "Action/Adventure" deal. So, three days later, here's...

Uhm... well... Having read the others, I feel that mine's going to be among the worst. I've come a long way since that fateful first attempt =p What was the title? ... "Banov's Amazing Pokemon Adventure" ... There, I said it. What was it about? A journey fiction starring a Mary-Sue self...

I'm a little late discovering this thread, but nonetheless! I have a new fanfic up, "Burning Spirit!" It's a high-energy action-adventure about a hotheaded guy who sets off to beat the gym leader Byron on an impulse. It'll be a short miniseries of 5 chapters. So far the reaction's all been...

Don't forget protrainereon! And I don't think darklakitu is writing anything.

Total chance, I happened to be browsing to see if I'd gotten any more replies and recognized your name at the top.

Hey, I actually did recognize you from Serebii. I, too, am dual-running my current fic both here and there. Not that it makes getting readers any easier.. >__>; I read through, just put up my comments as I went along. Ha. I've never thought of the nicknaming thing in reverse. But it's an...

'Pokemon' doesn't need to be capital. That's up to the writer. Personally, I leave it lowercase. After all, we don't capitalize the word 'animal.'

I read it. Here are some of the things I noticed that ought to be changed... "Young man?" Gary's only like... 14 or something, right? 16? Nuisance isn't ever used like that. What? 'screamed' makes him sound hysterical. Use 'yelled' instead. 'Left' is totally unnecessary. Move "...

I've read chapter one so far. It's not bad, but the writing seems to be pretty awkward. For example: Easily cut down to, "Ash found himself at a fork in the road, but had no idea which path to take. At pikachu's request, they followed a path toward a cabin, hoping to find some help."...