Recent content by Breezy

A/N warning: Violent/suicidal imagery and cursed-filled fights up ahead. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ I think the problem with trying to forget your past is that you are forced to remember it in order to forget it. Forget it, they tell you, you tell yourself. What do you want to forget? The very thing you...

He was in my dream. It’s been a while since I last dreamed of him. I almost forgot I dreamed of him until she brought it up. It came back to me like heavy patches of rain, quick thunderstorms that are gone as soon as you spot them. You remember the lightning; you don’t remember when it...

Not worth posting it in the thread, but in the new Reviewing challenge thread, you might want to edit this month to ... April. Or something. haha.

Thanks. =P I'm really glad that plot bunny hopped in my head now. It really was one of the last things I threw in, but everyone seems to like it. =P Ooh, so it's not just me then? Those swirly eyes used to scare me as a kid. XP Oh, definitely. Writing slice-of-life stories are pretty nice to...

Thanks for taking the time to review; it's greatly appreciated. =) Yeah, I've read a few pokemon fics that are told from a child's POV, and the main problem I found was that either the kid sounded way too old for his/her age or way too young for his/her age. (People rely heavily on baby talk...

I actually forgot about her too until the prompt came up. Actually it went, "hey pokeballz" then "hey kurt" then "MAISY OMG!" improper punctuation and all. Glad you thought her portrayal is accurate; writing in the voice of a little girl was super fun. Do you mean pokemart? D: Either way, the...

Thanks for reading, but think you could specify why it bored you? (Likewise, how is it a good story if it did bore you? Or, not that I'm complaining, why you kept reading if the first few paragraphs bored you?) Was it the basic plot or something else?

In some ways, she knows he's kidding, but it's good enough for her. She hands him his last Friend Ball and poses her next question in such a way that it sounds like a challenge. Ethan smiles at her, the answer evident in his eyes. Rating: PG Word Count: 4,350 Verse: Generation IV, HG/SS...

Ohey, I finally caught PC up with the other sites I post this story on. Hi! This chapter really needs warning, hopefully without me blurting out what’s up ahead. The Lucas/Dawn scene in this chapter is … Let’s just say I took full advantage of the PG-14 rating, specifically the sexual...

Have you ever thought of your life in seconds? How if you were five seconds ahead or five seconds behind, you would be drastically different? I think the consensus is things are up to fate, an undetermined destiny waiting to be found. But I think it's up to timing. I'm not sure what my point...

I like the word “maybe.” It's a nice word. ... Diet: Sweets ~ ~ ~ Chapter Twelve ~ ~ ~ Lucas was a fantastic battler, Dawn realized. Actually, she always knew that, but today was the first time in a long time that she saw him battle, and darn he was impressive. It was the only time the...

I'm taking a break today. I'm also taking her out to lunch later. Crap. ... Type: Psychic/Bug ~ ~ ~ Chapter Eleven ~ ~ ~ You are lost, aren't you? I have been watching you for a while. Follow me. ~ ~ ~ Night. Day four. Lane had a soccer game today. They didn't go, of course. Lane...

Kind of like a chicken running around with its head cut off? Lol. It's horribly fascinating for some reason, but you can't explain why ... Directionless is a new one, though I'm glad it's not a bad thing in your eyes (I think lol). I know the story starts off pretty slow before picking up...

Common sense tells me that I should be mad at myself. Or guilty. Or both. I'm not. Possible ability: Run away – enables sure get away. ~ ~ ~ Chapter Ten ~ ~ ~ Nighttime is a time of solace. It is where you put all the stress from the day into a tight, neat thought and look over it, put...

I agree, and there's probably a more kiddish word to describe eyes (circles!). I'm not sure how I missed that. I think because I didn't look at it as an analogy for the word "eyes" ("She looked up, the sky reflecting in her bright green orbs" and the works) but as a description of what the...