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Thanks for the advice! I suppose since I'm the author, I always feel like I can make it better. I'm glad you're interested! Here is chapter two.
Chapter Two
Spadille hated having to stay hidden.
Sneaking into the Galan Manor hadn’t gone as well as planned. Soreli had hired more guards...
Since linking docs isn't allowed (sorry about that!) I'll just post my story here. As to not overwhelm the thread, I'll post the chapters a few days apart. I posted the prologue and chapter one, only because the prologue is very short. Once again, it isn't good, but I do appreciate all...
Hey everyone! So I'm working on a Fantasy project, and I'd really like to see what you all think. It is my first attempt at writing something, so it isn't very good, but I would appreciate some feedback. In the rules it said that I should warn you if there are any touchy subjects. There is minor...