Recent content by darkgirl

Cool! If you think they're rubbish, I think the next Chapter'll be ace! They probably do have a bit to much speech in them, and not much description, but, as you say, you weren't brilliant when these were wrote. You're only 12, aren't you? You've got great potential. If you work at it and don't...

That's just freaky. You've never seen Pokemon Heroes but you got the same idea! Anyway, I agree with Charlie. Add a bit of description and perhaps try to cut back on speech. Otherwise, cool.

:cool: I trian dark pokemon, I am currently making a new team, but not all are dark... Umbreon L 57 attacks shadowball moonlight psychic and bite Houndoom L53 attacks flamethrower faint attack crunch bite Arcanine L57 attacks flamethrower bite ember take down Lapras L 53 ice beam sing surf and...