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I'm sorry again for not posting up a new chapter, I've been a little busy lately and I've had barely any time to make this chapter. Well if there are any mistakes or ajustments that I need to make, please let me know. Enjoy the story! Chapter 13: Enter: Rustboro City Alex, Jake, and Crystal...

Here is the next chapter. Enjoy! Chapter 12: Heroes Of Double Battles Both seeming like grunts from a mysterious team, both the man and the woman grunt threw down their pokeball. For the man: Poochena, and for the woman: Mightyena. "Go Zigzagoon!" James cried as he tossed his pokeball high...

Thank you for you're advice Jeffback, I'll try not to rush these chapters. Well here is the next chapter. Enjoy! Chapter 11: A Loss And A Lesson As Treecko and Mightyena stared off aginst each other, as they were the only two who remained in the battle, Crystal commanded first. "Alright...

I kinda like both Dustox, and Beautifly. However, Beautifly is alot more colorful, and is flying type as well. I myself like Flying-Types a little more than Poison-Types. So I vote for Beautifly

Well, the comma errors are possibly from miss-typing, I have a habit of Doing that alsot, especially when I'm rushing. I know I've probably been rushing these past few chapters, so I'll try to slow down a little. Well anyways, here is the next chapter. If there are any mistakes or any...

Hello, Aoku, welcome to the Pokecommunity!

I'd say Dialga. He is part Steel and Steel Pokemon have great defences. He also isn't weak aginst Dragon-Type attacks, wich Palkia is weak to. So overall, I think Dialga is a little better.

Thats pretty impressive for ms paint. I really like the Lucario picture, I give them an: 8/10.

Ok, thank you for the advice, I'll do that. And I'm sorry for not having an update here in awhile, its a long story, so I'll just post in this chapter. Here it is, I hope you all enjoy it! Chapter 9: Two Friends, Four Pokemon, One Double Battle "Alright, Wurmple, go!" Jake smiled and threw...

Ok, here is the next chapter, I hope you all enjoy it! Chapter 8: A Battle For Two; A Double Battle! After the battle in PetalBurg Woods, and adding a new member to the team, Alex and his friends our heading on to the other side of route 104, were they will battle the two trainers that...

Oh, I always thaught it was spelled with an 'e', Sorry about that. >.< And sorry about the grammar mistakes, to be honest I never was the best at spelling.I'll use the spell check for these chapters. (at first I didn't notice there was a spell check) Also, I'm planning on adding some trainer...

Both of those drawings are awesome, I'd give them both a 9/10!

Oh yeah, sorry about that.Sometimes I forget to capitalize their names.I'll go back and edit my chapters and capitalize them. Anyways, here is the next chapter. I hope you enjoy it. Chapter 6: One Locked Gym, One Big Forest Soon our heroes finnally reach PetalBerg City.With all three...

Ok, got it.I'll put in more Description for these future chapters.Thanks for the advice. Chapter 5: Catching A Ralts As Alex, Crystal, and Jake finished shopping from the pokemart, the three began to head over to route 102. "so have we gotten everything?" Crystal asked to the Alex and...

Ok, here is the next chapter, I've edited my previous chapters and I've made this chapter a little longer.If it needs to be any more longer or needs anymore ajustments, please just let me know. Chapter 4: Alex VS. James "Zigzagoon, come on out!" James threw his pokeball into the sky as a...